Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that today people were highly regarded teachers because of their important role in the success of the society. Contrary to this popular belief, there are still those who argue that teachers were more appreciated in the past because they had the role of instructive for people at those times, but today that view was disappeared from peoples' mind. However, I, to great extent, disagree with this idea that teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were today.
First and foremost, people in the past was not aware of the importance of education in their daily life. Most of the jobs did not need an academic background to do. For example, the usual occopations were done by hand working and hard physical activeties, not by macheins. In the basence of technology, most parenst prevented their children even from basic education, in order to keep them for helping in farming or other relevent works.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that in the past sophesticated people did not enrol in teaching careers. Teachers' salary was among the lowest ones and they had not high social status. The reason for it is the fact that most wealthy and well-known families prepared their children for jobs such as adminstrative and merchanting, they hired teachers just as low level employee for the education of their children. Nonetheless, today most of the talented young people choose teacher as a career after hard study and having brilint grades in school.
Finally, yet importantly, it is true that in the past teachers had the role of adviser for people. In spite of it, they were regared as an adviser only for few close people which already were aware of the vlaue of education and knowledge for human life. Indeed, others mainly accepted and recougnaized church as a center for getting a consultation.
On the basis of reasons that were mentioned above, I was convinced that teachers today were more appreciated by society than they were in the past.
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- One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them take a part time job 76
- Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea? 73
- TPO 54 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 89
- Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. 63
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, nonetheless, so, still, well, for example, such as, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96811594203 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59926798866 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4836112078 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.266666667 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268040197695 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100627118581 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131709444825 0.0737576698707 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185635584844 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143743082218 0.0645574589148 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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