TPO42
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when do similar tasks all day long.
Nowadays, job satisfaction is the most important parameter in efficiency of every company. so, it is obviously vital to increase employee’s satisfaction. personally, I believe that workers are more satisfied when they do different types of tasks rather than doing similar tasks all day long. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, working of different type of tasks is less boring. I mean when workers are challenging with various issues in their work, they will become more energetic and more creative. this creativity helps them feeling useful and well-efficient. so, they would be more satisfied about their occupancy. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. I had been working in an Artificial Intelligence company for three years. my task was preprocessing the data gathered from traffic control cameras. that was consistent for all three years. I got bored with my job and I lost my energy for mentioned task. I thought that I'm a trash man and I decided to suicide. But, my friend told me to change my job and interview a new company. I did so and I got a new job with different tasks include preprocessing, processing, and post-processing. I became so motivated to participate in all aspects. I found myself very useful and creative. I'm now working on that company and I am really satisfied about my job.
Secondly, facing various types of tasks increase motivation among workers. If workers participate in different tasks, they would initiate their hidden potentials. Some new talents may be introduced and the company will benefit from these talents and in closed-loop positive feedback, the motivation of workers will increase. An increase in motivation leads to job satisfaction between workers. For instance, I found myself talented in post-processing tasks rather than preprocessing in the mentioned example of my personal life. I showed more interest in the new task and the employers consider my motivation. they raise my salary and I raised my motivation during the time at job. this positive feedback leads to a successful outcome in the projects I was involved.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that working on the different type of tasks make workers more satisfied. this is because different tasks are less boring and also increase motivation among workers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i feel, i mean, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12661498708 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04679981893 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49354005168 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5025396787 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.4137931034 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3448275862 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13793103448 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290123580376 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739408353882 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128399918087 0.0737576698707 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21479164892 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106885534953 0.0645574589148 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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