TPO47 Independent
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
there are several events such as expolarations including planets, meteors, and other cosmos findings, those of affect our blue world. some of them are scare our world's people, and these lead people to find some ways for solving theirs impacts.
First of all, for millenial years some galactical actions had been seen around the world, and out the world. that had been sought all countries, and these actions have different kinds of implications to our daily life, and influence every individuals. For example, some people more scare than the others and they would not like to be on far away their places, for their injuries. Because they always think that hitting by meteors.
Second, such events could increase, nations' military developments positively, becasue that is necessity, if not they would be in disasters. And, they should focus that type of facilities than daily life 'primitives such as going cinema, being parks, walking with their lovers.
In addition, altough there would be some critical situation atmosphere of the world of us, it has firewall that cover human. And, it cares me and other people. This lets us behave freely, and causes relax mode for our mind.
All of these reasons, people should consantrate fifty pecent to their normal life, and the other time they have to seek new methods for these problems. And, life is beautifull, people should not scare and be fun.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
there are several events such as expolaration...
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Suggestion: Some
...ndings, those of affect our blue world. some of them are scare our worlds people, an...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...en around the world, and out the world. that had been sought all countries, and thes...
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Line 2, column 380, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... away their places, for their injuries. Because they always think that hitting by meteo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, for example, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 232.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01724137931 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37255412576 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 618.680645161 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2726129159 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5384615385 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10013855983 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383123715904 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258786670811 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0579814068295 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258121887621 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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