TPO51
Today, with the development of technology and the industrial revolution, most families have a television in their house. Television has revolutionized the style of living. This matter that whether the television has a significant impact on young people or not is a controversial issue between individuals. Some people believe that television has made a contribution to people's lives, however, others think that television plays a negative role in young people's behavior. I personally agree with the last belief for two reasons that I will explain them in the following essay.
The first noteworthy point regarding this issue is that television programs contain many violent scenes, and there are many bad languages in these programs. Young people are not mature enough and they cannot distinguish between wrong and right behaviors. They may copy these negative behaviors and they can do these manners in real life. For example, my nephew spent a lot of time watching television when he was a young man. Because he usually watched violent movies, he had a conflict with their friends and he did not get rid of violence until adulthood.
Moreover, television programs can affect physical health. Today, young people spend most of their time in front of the television. They do not do any exercise. Television can threaten young people's life. Young people may get some diseases like obesity. Studies have shown that many young people in developed and undeveloped countries get obesity.
Also, movies can distract young people from their works. They could spend their time in something with a practical purpose. For instance, they can gain experience by having a part-time job. It helps them to make money and prepare themselves for the future. It has a constructive effect on their personality.
All in all, by considering the mentioned ideas, I think that the negative effects of television on young people are more than its positive effects. It is due to the fact that these people may imitate the bad behaviors and do them in society, and television prevents people from doing exercise, hence they may get sick.
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- Essay topics: TPO 48 - Integrated Writing Task 76
- the way people dresses is a good indication of her or his personality or character. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- It is more important for the government to spend money to improve internet access than to improve public transportation. 76
- Question:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and e 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13913043478 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72711265944 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530434782609 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4892429177 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0869565217 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4347826087 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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