In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
In twenty years there will be fewer car in use than there are today. Population and pollution is increasing in world at a rapid pace and measures should be taken to lessen their effect on traffic.
Population of the world is increasing at rapid pace which means more number of cars required by people. Traffic jams frequency and time has increased severly in many metropoliton cities in past few decades. Which have lead to increase in public transport like subway or local buses within the cities. As the population is increasing more and more cities are adopting these changes. For example,In India, few years ago, metro train that runs through city was only available in kolkata, but now metro is available or under construction in most of the major cities of india. People are cherishing this change as it has reduced travelling time and fare.
Pollution has also increased to a toxic level, people should look to reduce these levels. Best method to reduce pollution is to increase the use of public transportation. In Singapore, government has increased the use of public transport which have led to significant reduction in pollution level there. Other countries should follow Singapore in order to preserve environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , In
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 43.0788530466 14% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 1977.66487455 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 203.0 407.700716846 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05418719212 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70627679517 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 212.727598566 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600985221675 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 618.680645161 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8188419797 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195599661611 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102973837295 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.271479610482 0.0737576698707 368% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202097048684 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.231444295361 0.0645574589148 359% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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