A university education is essential to success in life.
successful life has a different meaning for one person to another. In consequence, it is not rational to prescribe the same order for everyone and make them sure by following it, they can enhance their prospect of lives. Nowadays, one of the common paths is College education which many people around the world choose it, in order to reach their dreaming lives. Although it may not be the right decision for everybody, I personally believe that the higher the education is, the better the future. colleges provide opportunities for their students to grain professional qualifications as well as job skills, and I have a myriad of remarkable reasons for my assertion two of which will be elaborated subsequently.
To begin with, future careers and the salary afforded effect widely in our lives. University graduates face with the lower unemployment rate in addition to the higher potential income. Today, the businesses are specialized. Most Professional and managerial employers tent to get more value to people who have studied a specific field and became expert in it. In that case, a person who has a bachelor degree has a better chance to get a decent job rather than a person who has a diploma. Therefore, they earn more than their non-graduated counterparts. On the other hand, there are jobs which certainly require a college degree such as being a doctor. There is no way except admitting to the medical college for being a doctor.
Another reason is, going to university is not just about getting the degree, it also is about building and developing key skills which help us to be successful in our following careers. One of the key skill is communication. Universities help students stronger their career networks. Also, many universities have alumina networks and LinkedIn groups to connect the former and later students together. By making connections with classmates, professors and guest speakers this chance is provided for students to build their future career, and get the job positions easily. For example, the university where I am studying at holds a ceremony each year in which all students no matter, when they graduated, are invited in order to link the new students to the business world.
To make a long story short, having discussed the topic from two controversial points of view, it is fair to say that in today's life, it is vital for adults to tend to go to schools and colleges. Since not only it leads them to have better employability, but also provides chances for them to make connections with other business managers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2131.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97897196262 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82938715928 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551401869159 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.336474623 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.476190476 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.380952381 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118687817717 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355312853376 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494334287634 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065054965122 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370840587615 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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