Education is one of the basic prerequisite for a country to develop, it is almost impossible for a country to reach the height of success without having educated skilled manpower and I completely agree such vital sector should be free so that many students will get opportunities.
Firstly, In today's society universities fee is reaching its height, Many people who have the ability and wish to attend university are not being able to do so due to financial crisis. Let's take my friend Sharon for example, she was our class topper in high school and she always wanted to study medicine but due to her parents not being able to pay the university fee she had to give up on her dream of becoming a doctor. this is just one example there are various other people that we come across in our life who have so much to contribute if given the opportunity.
Furthermore, providing free university education is not only gain for individual but the country as a whole will also get alot from these skilled educated manpower, educated people have knowledge and ideas that will help country to prosper. Some countries in Europe can be taken as example that provide free university education and in return has seen a tremendous development in various fields.
To put it in a nutshell providing free university education is an win-on-win situation for both the students and country. so government should without any dilemma invest in providing free education.
- In the future students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers or television or of studying at traditional schools Which would you prefer Use reasons and specific details to explain your choice 76
- More and more people ore using the internet to do their tasks rather then doing in person e g bonking shopping hotel booking etc Do the advantages of this trend outweighs the disadvantages 78
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement All university students should be required to take at least one class that teaches the culture of a country other than their own Use specific reasons and example to support your opinion
- A University education should be free Do you agree or disagree Why Use examples and reasons to develop your argument 60
- Government should spend money constructing new houses rather than preserve historic buildings Do you agree or disagree 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
... contribute if given the opportunity Furthermore providing free university education is ...
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Suggestion:
...tremendous development in various fields To put it in a nutshell providing free u...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... providing free university education is an winonwin situation for both the student...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1977.66487455 60% => OK
No of words: 247.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82591093117 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63482826491 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574898785425 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 247.0 20.1344086022 1227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1192.0 100.406767564 1187% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 247.0 20.6045352989 1199% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 59.0 5.45110844103 1082% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249093518305 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.249093518305 0.076458572812 326% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160167166181 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338885037952 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 124.8 11.7677419355 1061% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -179.23 58.1214874552 -308% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 99.6 10.1575268817 981% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.21 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.02 8.01818996416 237% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 10.002688172 600% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 100.8 10.0537634409 1003% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 125.0 10.247311828 1220% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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