We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people. In your opinion, what are some important characteristics of a co-worker (someone you work closely with)? Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these characteristics are important.
Nowadays in a period of rapid industrial development, work has a leading role in daily life and usually people spend more time with co-workers than with their families, that is why it is necessary to have a good atmosphere in the collective. Personally, I believe that the responsibility and professional skills are the most important characteristics of a worker. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, the ability to take the full responsibility for own actions is a great skill from the perspective of company’s aims and the attitude between colleges. Continuously, when the person tries to delegate his duties instead of discharging obligations, it always leads to the conflict. The whole concept of the teamwork is based on this characteristic and with such an attitude, the highest goals are achieved. My own experience is a compelling example of this. As I have been working on my first job, our team-leader was frequently criticizing our implementations and blamed us for every failure, even though in nearly all cases he was guilty. As a direct consequence, the collective decided to leave the job and an entire project was destroyed.
Secondly, every participant is supposed to be a professional in his area and meet all requirements, as this sort of people value others opinion, criticism and feedback. Furthermore, disrespect and irresponsibility of only one person can lead to the failure of an entire group. For instance, my cousin was working as a software developer ant they were creating a mobile game. When they were under a strong pressure of a deadline, their web designer quitted and that is why the game has never came to light.
In conclusion, good qualities like professional attitude and team spirit among co-workers make working environment healthy and enhances job satisfaction. Every person should possess these traits not only to reduce work’s pressure, but also in order to get job done well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 492, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, sort of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11620795107 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18633009194 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620795107034 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6122056044 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.533333333 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22784432468 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062602052374 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510647802932 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134777829423 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499970027313 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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