We need zoos. Do you agree or disagree? Why? Give examples and reasons to develop your opinion.
Personally, I agree. I think that we need zoos because they are educational, they are fun for families and they protect endangered animals.
First, zoos are educational. For example, when I was 12, my teacher took us to the zoo in Berlin. I had never seen wild animals before. I had just read about them in books and seen them on the TV. But seeing them in real life was amazing, especially the lions. On the TV, they are rather small, but seeing them alive, they were really big. By going to the zoo, I definitely saw things in a whole new light.
Second, zoos are also fun for families. For example, I have a family and we always go to the zoo every summer. My wife makes a picnic and we spend all day there. My kids love taking pictures and learn all about the animals, especially the gorillas. Being outside is good for my children. Best of all, they can leave the internet and the TV at home.
Finally, zoos protect endangered animals. For instance, I saw two pandas in Washington DC zoo last year and they had a baby. If there were no zoos, pandas would disappear because we are taking their land away. However, in a zoo pandas are safe. It is not perfect but, with no zoos, there might not be any pandas left.
For those reasons, I believe that we need zoos because they are educational, they are fun for families and they protect endangered animals.
- TPO 32 - Integrated Writing 81
- TPO-01 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reasons and examples to support 86
- TPO 01 -Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reasons and examples to support 80
- TPO 02- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. 70
- TPO 01- At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. 70
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.193220338983 0.229887763892 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.162711864407 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.071186440678 0.0866891130778 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0576271186441 0.046263068375 125% => OK
Pronouns: 0.118644067797 0.0685040099705 173% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0983050847458 0.118717715034 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0372881355932 0.0351676179071 106% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.33752727506 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0101694915254 0.0309702414327 33% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0779661016949 0.0887237588012 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0101694915254 0.0209618222197 49% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00338983050847 0.0139019557991 24% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1358.0 2387.08602151 57% => OK
No of words: 252.0 408.028673835 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38888888889 5.86048508987 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.48200974243 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.261904761905 0.338922669872 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.178571428571 0.251872472559 71% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.119047619048 0.174417080927 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0634920634921 0.112833075102 56% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33752727506 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524397521467 106% => OK
Word variations: 54.7346403794 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.5533526081 58% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4347524588 48.84282405 58% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.6666666667 120.699889404 54% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0 20.5533526081 58% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.644075263715 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 29.8571428571 45.7405998639 65% => OK
Elegance: 0.97 1.45489161554 67% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131605527154 0.300154397459 44% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0820326835432 0.103427244359 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0916650415537 0.0752933317313 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.453512722052 0.497263757937 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.209116335049 0.151897553556 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475624961237 0.114077575197 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384992339641 0.0781384742642 49% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.193238219129 0.336927656856 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0550289049982 0.067059652881 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936676823592 0.210909579961 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031946496672 0.0618886996521 52% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 13.6433691756 59% => OK
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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