What are the effects of aging population?
The phenomenon of aging population is gaining ground/ momentum/currency in developed nations where longevity is lengthened greatly by dint of higher living standards, better health care and serene life style. Some people fear that this trend may jeopardize/imperil the society in the long run owing to the dearth of young labor force, while others view it as inevitable/ineluctable and see positive effects/the bright side of this issue. My essay will analyze both upsides and downsides of this problem.
First of all, it is believed that the longer people live, the more they enjoy their lives. After years of diligence and contributions, the idea of glorying in a comfortable life in the advanced ages is wonderful; the senior citizen can read books, write articles, pursue their own passion or live life to the fullest. However, along with their enjoyment are pains as well. The old age is often associated with diseases which deprive the senior citizen of basking in their life, for instance, a bout of insomnia, hypertension, loss of memory, to name a few.
Secondly, from a broader perspective, say, the social view point, the emergence/surge of dense population of the old/ the aged is seen as a catalyst for the growth of nursing and health-care related industries. With more old people dominating, doctors and other health professionals are likely to work around the clock to come up with new medicines to treat diseases/ailments/maladies and enhance the quality of healthcare of the old who, unlike the younger
generation, put their wellbeing on the front burner. The flip side of the coin is the probable danger of a huge waste of money poured into welfare, which might place strain on the government, while they are already overburdened with so many responsibilities. To top it all, despite the existence of high-quality products made by the senior citizens who have a wealth of experience and knowledge, the society would be in a dire shortage of the young who have a bigger say over the economic destiny of a nation.
Last but not least, it is thought that along with the presence of the old is the possibility of the preservation of well-valued/time-honored traditional norms. It stands to reason that the old who often hold back on the past value tend to put high emphasis on/stress the sustenance of the old day beauty/ their halcyon days. By contrast, the counter-argument is that as a result of so-called conservatism normally seen in the old, the society will be in shortage of new ideas and ideals that are conducive to a dynamic and open economy. In a word, the society would undergo gains and pains when this trend prevails.
All in all, the growth in aging population is an acknowledged trend, having positive and negative impacts on the individual and society alike.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for instance, in short, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2338.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01716738197 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26506500502 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562231759657 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 734.4 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 14.0 3.08781362007 453% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.9335900976 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.125 100.406767564 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.125 20.6045352989 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115415685668 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346895165016 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509594033928 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659435810543 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548855235138 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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