What are some of the qualities of a good parent? Use specific details and examples to explain your answer.
It is critically vital that parents will influence the child's physical and psychological development intensively. Parents demand to adjust to their disadvantages so that children might not have to face difficult situations in their future careers due to their attitudes and characteristics that impact their interactions with people. In my opinion, a high-quality parent shall require the personal traits of responsibility, respect, and kindheartedness. I feel this way for three reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, it is noticeable that an irresponsible parent will directly impact the kid's childhood. If parents do not see their child as their family, they are not willing to devote all their life to the newborns, instead, they will choose to abandon the young and enjoy their own life rather than caring about the child. For instance, children who do not obtain complete families feel a lack of safety and less confidence to open their hearts to others, which is a pity for the world to lose a precious diamond due to the carelessness of parents.
In addition, there is no doubt that parents ought to respect children's decisions instead of forcing them to act as they wish. It is the adults' nature to have fantasies about their children's future careers, yet it is not suitable for them to ask their young to fulfill their uncompleted dreams without the youngsters' permission. By way of illustration, everyone has regrets in their lives, yet parents must understand that the children do not belong to them, and they must let go of their child as the time comes.
Last on the contrary not least, there is no denying that parents shall provide a kind heart so that they can convey all their love to the child. There are stages in children's psychological development that cause them to be fragile and unable to control their emotions. The young might feel a lack of confidence or be less motivated. Instead of forcing them to keep on track, parents need to listen to the youngsters' hearts patiently and assist them to go through those hardships. To cite an instance, the children's heart is vulnerable and sensitive during adolescence, and they care more about the aspect of others, which is critical for parents to be aware of their children's mental health or it will be liable to lead to irreversible mental illness.
In conclusion, I believe that responsibility, respect, and kindheartedness are the more essential requirements for parents than academic levels, salaries, or power.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'kids'' or 'kid's'?
Suggestion: kids'; kid's
...onsible parent will directly impact the kids childhood. If parents do not see their ...
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Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
...ing them to act as they wish. It is the adults nature to have fantasies about their ch...
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Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youngsters'' or 'youngster's'?
Suggestion: youngsters'; youngster's
...ll their uncompleted dreams without the youngsters permission. By way of illustration, eve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2117.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06459330144 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93417029603 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495215311005 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.8110560873 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.3125 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.125 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0600038503658 0.236089414692 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273086859863 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239762881284 0.0737576698707 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0420530089088 0.150856017488 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155086335376 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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