What discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
There are many contrivances for the last 100 years which has contributed to our lives, however the most significant is the computer. I will explain why I feel this way in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, the advent of a computer drastically changed not only the life of adults, but also our young generations. Recently this invention helps them in almost everything from writing homework to leisure time activities. Moreover, a computer make it easier to send essential documents swiftly or writing a letter which years ago was possible solely with postal office services. There is no shortage of opinion that a computer is helpful and works in favor of people by establishing digital and easy way of carrying out regular tasks without causing any harm on human.
What's more is that computers are considered as a best gift for one child due to the enormous capacity of variety of games. As a matter of fact, a computer is not devised only for work or studying. Also, modern kids can brag with the prevalent access of computers as a way of entertainment. I remember my first computer when I was 15 years old and felt so happy since my dad gifted me. Although, it seems high price one computer is not expensive at all and one average family in the middle social class can afford it as a gift to make their kids happy. Therefore, the number of families buying it increases gradually every year. If computers had not taken place in our every day lives, we might have felt tedious.
In conclusion, I would say that the invention of a computer is the greatest achievement in the last 100 years and can be seen as a beneficial for people due to the numerous functions it has. We definitely can do our jobs effectively and our kids can write their homework. Moreover, it is the best present for one kid as a way of spending a spare time and having fun.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, i feel, in conclusion, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60843373494 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67084276478 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581325301205 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9890610042 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.625 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107804583382 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374825309707 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546607172265 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803576777735 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448145459785 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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