what do you prefer studying alone or with a group?
Generally speaking, the education plays a very crucial part in our life. It is important because it helps us to improve our knowledge and live a better life. If the people’s opinion is going to be considered, some of them would choose studying alone, others would like to study in groups. In my opinion, I believe that studying alone is much better for the two following essential reasons.
First, admittedly, studying alone gives you an opportunity to focus more on what you are studying. Concentration is one of the biggest keys of success, if you lose this key, the chances of your succession will drop dramatically, this might happen when you study with other people. In fact, studying alone will help you to get rid of any distraction you might encounter when you study with other students, especially if they are having a hard time understanding the material. Hence, you have to spend more time with them trying to explain to them the simple concepts that you digest it already. A vivid example can be give to shed a light on what alluded above. Few weeks ago, I had a chemistry exam. My friend invited me to her home to study together, claims that will help us to go through the material easily. While we were studying together, I realized that I was spending more time on things I already good at it like the acid- base reactions, but because she was having a hard time understanding these type of things, I have to go slowly with her through this material. I Finally gave up and went back home studying by myself. This is a simple example how studying with other students might affect you negatively.
Second, studying alone provides a flexibility in your schedule. Some students are not the morning persons, others are not able to study at night. In this case, studying with other students will put a lot of stress on student’s life by trying to wake up early or stay late at night in order to be at the same page with other members of the group. Hence, this will negatively effect on student’s performance. However, studying alone will give you an option to study whenever you feel ready and comfortable, you do not have to rush yourself or stress yourself out.
By the way of conclusion, based on the aspects revealed above.In my perspective and the way I look at it I believe that studying alone is more beneficial based on the reasons mentioned above.
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The flaw: No. of Words: 421
The flaw: No. of Words: 421 while No. of Different Words: 210 means it has a lot of duplicated content. If you look at the subjects of the sentences, most of them are:
studying alone
You
I
You need more sentences like: 'the education plays a very crucial part in our life.'
suggestions:
1. Check and read articles online about advanced essay writing.
2. Read more English articles, magazines, blogs by native English writers. Pay attention how they use verbs
3. Listening to English radios or watch English TV programs like CNN. This will help writing too.
4. Write essays with more variety of sentences. Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Give some time and follow those rules, you will see a great difference.
the chances of your succession will drop
the chances of your success will drop
this will negatively effect on student’s performance
this will negatively affect on student’s performance
flaws:
No. of Words: 421 while No. of Different Words: 210
the ideal condition:
No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 21 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 421 350
No. of Characters: 1897 1500
No. of Different Words: 210 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.53 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.506 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.472 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 118 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.05 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.12 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.311 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.471 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.19 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5