What famous place would you like to visit? use details and reasons to support you respond
Everyone has a dreaming place in their mind that if they find the chance they will at least visit one time in their life. In my opinion, this nice place would be Dubai. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, Dubai is center of small enterprises as well as big companies. Different companies around the world have their branches in Dubai, so you can find almost any products there. This is very essential for those who want to run their own business, as you can visit entrepreneurs and the owner of big companies, and get vital advices from them. In addition, you can share your own ideas about their business with them, and work with them. Dubai is the place for improving your business skills.
Secondly, Dubai is the best place for touristic purposes, as the diversity of cultures and people and the facility and welfare for tourism. In Dubai people come from nearly every country, some of them come for employment while others come for business. So these diversity of people have brought with them different cultures and customs. You can interact with different people, and eat from any cousin around the world there. In addition, it has many place to visit, such as Burj-e-Khalifa which is the most beautiful skyscrapers around the globe, as well as Nakhl island, a city that build above sea water, which the most famous island in our planet. If you plan to travel anywhere for vacation don not forget Dubai.
I always want to go to a place where I can relax, at the same time it should be in beneficiary for my career plan. If you are thinking the same, so you will by default choose Dubai.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this diversity' or 'these diversities'?
Suggestion: this diversity; these diversities
...ment while others come for business. So these diversity of people have brought with them differ...
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Line 3, column 446, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun place seems to be countable; consider using: 'many places'.
Suggestion: many places
...nd the world there. In addition, it has many place to visit, such as Burj e Khalifa which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, at least, i feel, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58585858586 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29304053484 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552188552189 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1084866409 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.125 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1612347037 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590592899047 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047917952362 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107444742819 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196541224258 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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