What should I do for gain very well writing score in TOEFL test?!
TOEFL is very complex and hard test for a lot of students in intire world,but it has standard structure and design for judge the level of english fluency and accurecy. ETS, the institute that make this test has a lot of experince in test design and the test takers of that institute have a lot of experince in complexity and difficulty of qustions.
For whom that located in besic level,I have some advice and instructions for doing well in TOEFL writing section.
For beginner in english learning,words and usage of words in sentence are very important. The person at this level should study the most important TOEFL words such as hardworkers word list,magoosh word list and TPO word list to increase his verbal knowlage. I think verbal knowledge is very important for readind and writing.after learning good vocab,that person must focuse on grammer,because grammer is the most important part in writing. Writing without any good structure and grammer definitely incounter with low score. Grammer is the alphabet of writing,that person should study grammer structers and taking notes of important part of grammer structures.
after doing that advices very well, person should study reading materials such as newspaper,magazines,scientific articles,litrecure books and well developed writings. It’s very routin way to increase comprehension by doing that activities. Comprehension and understanding the reading passage help person to learn proper structures,colucations,usefull grammer.besid of that,developing a critical thinking is very usefull for writing. Critical thinking devide in two part that include issue and argue thinking. In argue thinking, writer must suppot it’s own idea by critizie the main purpose of statement but in issue writing,the author could agree with statement and develop his idea by supporting the statement with proper examples.
Last instruction for becoming great writer is deciding to write many manuscripts, especially in TOEFL format. In TOEFL test,there are two writing task, integreted and independent tasks. In integreted task, prefessor talks about a scientific subject, then related passage to that subject appear on screen,while person who participate in exam must write with fusion of both lecture and passage. In intependent pasaage,person must develop an idea related to statement that introduce from beginning of the test. For both tasks,person should spend a lot of time to prepare its self for that test.there are 50 min for both tasks.
In conclution,for become great author especially wellknown scientifc author,a person should read a lot of materials besid of developing great comprehension.afterward, writing varity topics of subjects especially those that related to TOEFL test.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2017-06-14 | alifaghfouri1988 | 76 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...st for a lot of students in intire world,but it has standard structure and design fo...
^^^^
Line 2, column 37, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...s. For whom that located in besic level,I have some advice and instructions for d...
^^
Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , words
...ction. For beginner in english learning,words and usage of words in sentence are very...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , magoosh
...OEFL words such as hardworkers word list,magoosh word list and TPO word list to increase...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , that
...nd and writing.after learning good vocab,that person must focuse on grammer,because g...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , because
...vocab,that person must focuse on grammer,because grammer is the most important part in w...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 559, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , that
...core. Grammer is the alphabet of writing,that person should study grammer structers a...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
... important part of grammer structures. after doing that advices very well, person sh...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , magazines
...tudy reading materials such as newspaper,magazines,scientific articles,litrecure books and...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 122, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , litrecure
... newspaper,magazines,scientific articles,litrecure books and well developed writings. It&a...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 335, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , colucations
...e help person to learn proper structures,colucations,usefull grammer.besid of that,developin...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 377, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , developing
...olucations,usefull grammer.besid of that,developing a critical thinking is very usefull for...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 633, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...urpose of statement but in issue writing,the author could agree with statement and d...
^^^^
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...specially in TOEFL format. In TOEFL test,there are two writing task, integreted and in...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'tasks'?
Suggestion: tasks
...at. In TOEFL test,there are two writing task, integreted and independent tasks. In i...
^^^^
Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'task' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'tasks'.
Suggestion: tasks
...at. In TOEFL test,there are two writing task, integreted and independent tasks. In i...
^^^^
Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...passage to that subject appear on screen,while person who participate in exam must wri...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ith fusion of both lecture and passage. In intependent pasaage,person must develop...
^^
Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , person
...ture and passage. In intependent pasaage,person must develop an idea related to stateme...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 522, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , person
...om beginning of the test. For both tasks,person should spend a lot of time to prepare i...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , for
...re 50 min for both tasks. In conclution,for become great author especially wellknow...
^^^^
Line 6, column 76, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
...or especially wellknown scientifc author,a person should read a lot of materials b...
^^
Line 6, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ially those that related to TOEFL test.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, while, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2333.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60817307692 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.56174324335 2.67179642975 133% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509615384615 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.533171159 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.789473684 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8947368421 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52631578947 5.45110844103 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334147634629 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106619010364 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749292871969 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18173793656 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557178886976 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 10.9000537634 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.