What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Everyone wants to be successful in their life. everyone needs different skill to be successful in their life depending on their objective. in general, two skills are needed for most cases to be a successful in this planet. knowledge and idea now a days are most important things to change your life in this universe.
"Knowledge is power". how can be a person to be successful without any knowledge? what will happen if anyone try to repair a machine without any knowledge about engineering? obviously its seem not good at all, it is almost impossible to get reward for anything without knowledge. for instance, in a chemistry lab, a student tried to increase a solution pH upto 13 where he had lot of reagents in his table. he added hydrochloric acid without knowing how to increase a pH. finally professor found that resultant solution pH is 8. this is situation won't make a good impression to others.
"An Idea can change your life". in modern world people are attracted by different ideas as most people now-a-days want to represent in a different way than others. for instance, in our university's graduation class student namely Faria always wear different types of cloths that attract others student because everyone looks beautiful and stylish when they used to change their cloths in a way that are creative then others. another good example is facebook. there were so many social network before facebook but none of them was like facebook. facebook came up with new idea by creating an innovative social network.
in a conclusion, although people have different objective to do with their life as sports man, teacher or adventurer but all of them need to learn about their section along with new idea.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...sful in this planet. knowledge and idea now a days are most important things to change you...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'then', 'for instance', 'in general']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262195121951 0.229887763892 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.143292682927 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100609756098 0.0866891130778 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0396341463415 0.046263068375 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0518292682927 0.0685040099705 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131097560976 0.118717715034 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0182926829268 0.0351676179071 52% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76632088963 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0426829268293 0.0309702414327 138% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0670731707317 0.0887237588012 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00914634146341 0.0209618222197 44% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0213414634146 0.0139019557991 154% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1739.0 2387.08602151 73% => OK
No of words: 291.0 408.028673835 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97594501718 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.48200974243 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.371134020619 0.338922669872 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.281786941581 0.251872472559 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.20618556701 0.174417080927 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.147766323024 0.112833075102 131% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76632088963 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611683848797 0.524397521467 117% => OK
Word variations: 68.2785550159 59.2087087015 115% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.1666666667 20.5533526081 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9565484926 48.84282405 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6111111111 120.699889404 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.5533526081 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.644075263715 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.54480286738 343% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 44.3453608247 45.7405998639 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.75324675325 1.45489161554 121% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291114708487 0.300154397459 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.145863582525 0.103427244359 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.132218566117 0.0752933317313 176% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.474697643692 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.186912438077 0.151897553556 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994009600007 0.114077575197 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689160343268 0.0781384742642 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.194283278263 0.336927656856 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0334249109494 0.067059652881 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179164887274 0.210909579961 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079987139572 0.0618886996521 129% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.