When I want to make a big purchase, I must have to evaluate that whether it is worthy to spend much money on it. Among so many different information sources, I would like to trust advice from my intimates the most, because their views are more valid, they clearly know my preferences, and I can learn about the product comprehensively.
The main reason why I want to ask from familiar people is that the information obtained from them is credible. My friends or co-workers and I trust each other, as we have had a tight relationship for a long time, so they would give recommendations that are to my good. In the contract, advertisement on the media and words from salesperson are often subjective and exaggerated. For example, I was misled by them when I once bought an advanced laptop. The advertisement and salesmen both said that without power supply, the computer could stay on for at least ten hours. However, they intentionally did not clarify in which situation this could be achieved. After I took it back home, I found that if I want the laptop to stay on for such long time, I could not use any applications, but must left it alone. In the contrast, my friends would always tell me true properties of it.
Moreover, another reason for treating opinions from my peers as the most crucial is that these views are more suitable for me. This is because we have a tight connection, and thus they exactly know my preferences. Take my own experience as an example. Last year, I decided to buy a new cellphone and I was confused by so many brands. Then my friends helped me out, because they had already used different phones and clearly knew I usually used my smart phone as a camera. Consequently, they recommend me to buy the one that had the best photography system, and I was very satisfactory with it. My friends know a lot about me, and they have used the same products, so their advice always meets my inclinations.
Admittedly, the person know why I want to make this purchase is myself, so some people may think that my own views should be the most significant. However, if I make a purchase only based on my own perspectives, only would I focus on aspects of it that give me deep impressions but ignore many latent disadvantages. Compared with this, due to their own experience, views from intimates could help me to understand the big picture better. Had I overlooked admonishment from friends, I would end up with regrating and wasting large amounts of money.
In conclusion, I strongly hold the view that I would treat information from my friends and co-workers as the most crucial one, when I need to spend much money on one thing.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...thy to spend much money on it. Among so many different information sources, I would like to tr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, thus, at least, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 83.0 43.0788530466 193% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2189.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 473.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62790697674 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82545939124 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498942917548 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.599336333 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77272727273 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128387803433 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397011718633 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292341334579 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08453676394 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298930923074 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...thy to spend much money on it. Among so many different information sources, I would like to tr...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, thus, at least, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 83.0 43.0788530466 193% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2189.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 473.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62790697674 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82545939124 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498942917548 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.599336333 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77272727273 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128387803433 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397011718633 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292341334579 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08453676394 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298930923074 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.