When parents cannot afford time to accompany with their children, they could choose to send their children to child-care center where many children are cared together; or they could send their children to an individual caregiver, which one is better.
Nowadays, the face of our motherland has been changing with each passing day, and the result of this phenomenon is the pressure of people becoming increasingly heavy. So keeping kids company is an remarkable problem and nearly all parents are puzzled by it. Some parents assert that send their children to child-care center is the best solution because these kids who have the same experience can make up for lost company time. However, others disagree with their opinion, they consider that only the caregiver can take on heavy responsibilities cause they have more special skills of taking care of kids and they can replace part of the responsibilities of parents. In my opinion, I support sending children to child-care center is better.
First, young kids are ignorance so they don’t have the values of region, for example, when you ask your kid to back home during he playing with other children, he will refuse your requirement from his instincts. So they may are happy to stay at child-care center and consume their most of their daily life. I am so firm because there is an truly example around me. My uncle is a businessman and he has to utilize the every seconds of every day. For making up the lost time, he sent his kid to child-care center. At the beginning of the weekends, he was worried weather teachers in there put their attention on his kid. But now he never care about is because he finds his kid not only not have trouble in there but also even sometimes will share the interesting things about child-care center to them.
Moreover, as we all know, people prefer to talk with persons who have the same habits or similar personality with themselves. Same like kids, that means they may have more topics which could be talked between children rather than to their parents, because adults always define one things limited in stereotype even through there is an old saying said “Correct ideas are not innate in the mind.” For example, when our whole family go camping, my kids often be fascinate by other peer rather than the scene which we assert is fine. Sometimes talking with kid not only rely on parents, but also depends on children who weather want to talk with you.(这段感觉特别奇怪)
However, on balance, the issue above sending child to individual caregiver seem to be minor factors in comparison with sending child-care center. Because, individual caregiver not only cost lost of money but also you cannot make sure if they will really care of your kids.
From what has been discussed above, I can draw a conclusion that send children to child-care center is better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ingly heavy. So keeping kids company is an remarkable problem and nearly all paren...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: HE_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'during the playing'?
Suggestion: during the playing
...ple, when you ask your kid to back home during he playing with other children, he will refuse you...
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Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e happy to stay at child-care center and consume their most of their daily life. ...
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Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ily life. I am so firm because there is an truly example around me. My uncle is a ...
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Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('truly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('example') instead of another adjective.
...ily life. I am so firm because there is an truly example around me. My uncle is a businessman an...
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Line 3, column 643, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cares'.
Suggestion: cares
... attention on his kid. But now he never care about is because he finds his kid not o...
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Line 3, column 731, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put between 'will' and 'share'.
Suggestion: will sometimes share
...not have trouble in there but also even sometimes will share the interesting things about child-care...
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Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put between 'be' and 'fascinate'.
Suggestion: be often fascinate
...en our whole family go camping, my kids often be fascinate by other peer rather than the scene whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, so, as to, even so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2177.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87024608501 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74372908412 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525727069351 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.6812356841 48.9658058833 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.058823529 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2941176471 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371901612165 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12494205235 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966607877754 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221801195701 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512984592185 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.