When people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of the new country. Others prefer to keep their own customs. Compare these two choices. Which one do you prefer? Support your answer with specific details.
People usually travel or move to new countries for education,a business, a job and so on. At this time, a person faces a hard question whether to keep following his own customs or assimilate the customs of a new country. Some people do not want to accept the customs of the new place. However, I believe that a person should always absorb him self in the customs of the new country because it makes it easy for him to settle in a new country, helps him to make new friends there, and increases his knowledge about the new country.
To begin with, if a person is willing to follow the customs of the...
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