When people need to complain about a product or poor service, some prefer to complain in writing and others prefer to complain in person. Which way do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The world is repidly developing, and correspondingly, the increaslingly severe pollution problem can never be exaggerated. when it comes to a controcersial issue about the most useful action to enhance environment in the local commuties, some of human beings argue that planting trees and creating parkes plays an important role, while others believe that increasing access to public transportation will benefit. Personally, I prefer to choose to persuade local shops to stop providing plastic bags for consumers.
it is clear that stoping providing plastic bags will help reducing the source of pollution. The plastig bags usually are made from non-degradable matetials, which means that the plastic bags we buried into the soil cannot be decomposed into tiny parties. that is to say, the pollution level is proportional to the amount used. If people persuades shops to stop providing consumers with them, consumers would be more likely to use one for more times or recyclable bags instead . With fewer plastic meterial used, the white pollution can be eliminated in a large degree. take my best friend oliver as one example. oliver lived in Happy community, which is closely to Walmart. Everytime when oliver went shopping there, the supermarket would provide about one or more plastic bags for him to hold the goods, and new plastic ones would be provide again the next time. As a result, these white pollutions were all around in his community. last month, the volunteers of environmental protection club persuaded the manager not to providing plastic bags any more. oliver and his neighbors have to bring cloth bags themselves when going shopping. Surprisingly, the white pollutions were missing in two weeks later, and his community was rated as "the most Envirmental community" last week!
In terms of the planting trees and creating parks,it is not the effective factor for people to protect the environment. The reason is that these methods usually cost large amount of time and money. Even though these trees and parks enable surroundings more beautiful and cleaner, the envinment could not be enhanced in a few months. In this regard, I would refer to oliver, too. when some people cannot bear the terrible smell prodeced by the iron factory, they decided to establised parks and plants trees in them. however, things did not happen as they wished. after half a year, the trees all died due to the lack of knowledge in planting trees. So the air have not any improved. What's worse, they wasted much money for buying trees and building parks！
Besides, the way that increasing access to public transportatio on roads also provides limited help to environment protection. it is known that buses and trains are not convenient as the private cars. people who have a long distance between the working place and home can not take buses everyday for their low speed. In this regard, I may refer to myself, a doctor in Tongji hospital for nearly five years. everyday I have to go back and force from my home and the hospital twice, when oliver tried to make me take buses for the environment protection aim, I promised him. however, only two days after, I rechoiced taking my cars again, because it was a disaster for me spending three hours sitting on the buses acrossing about twenty kiolometers everyday!
All in all, I agree that stoping providing plastic bags is the most useful action to help environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, so, while, as a result, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2890.0 1977.66487455 146% => OK
No of words: 568.0 407.700716846 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08802816901 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88187981987 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70092662775 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 308.0 212.727598566 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542253521127 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 884.7 618.680645161 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 14.0 3.08781362007 453% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.0205026789 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.214285714 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53571428571 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.5376344086 506% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0686646366776 0.236089414692 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.016632206617 0.076458572812 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0220891830109 0.0737576698707 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.041513807995 0.150856017488 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258167477059 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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