We all face challenges in our lives. Everyone has their own method of solving challenges in their lives. Some people like to take the opinion of experienced people around them. Others may take a long time to think before making any decision. There are some people who like to take help from the Internet, as they think the Internet is a more reliable tool to find information for their problems. From my perspective, the former view carries more weight. I would take the position on account for the following reasons.
Primarily, problems are part and parcel of our lives. Everyone faces various kind of problems in life, but their problems are not particular or specific. There are many people who had already face similar problems in their lives. That's the reason, I prefer to take suggestions from them as they have more experienced about that specific matter. Not only that, but they have lived with the consequences of those problems, so they can provide us their pros and cons as well which will be easier for us to decide. My personal life is a compelling example of this. Two years back, I had to buy a laptop, but I was confused between the Apple brand and the Dell Brand. Fortunately, my cousin had already used both brand's laptop and that's why he suggested me to go for the Dell brand as Apple laptop is hard to use initially and because I had only a few simple requirements which I could be accomplished by buying a Dell brand. Finally, I bought the Dell laptop and I am still using that laptop without any trouble. Thus, by taking help from an experienced person, I could solve my problem easily.
Secondly, sometimes we cannot find the solutions even though it is simple and obvious. It happens to many people because they are so deep into their trouble that they cannot feel what is right or wrong. At this time, people who know us personally would help us to clear our doubts. My personal history is a compelling example of this. After 10th grade, I had to choose one specific field from Biology or Math, and I could not be able to make any decision. My father suggested me to take Biology, as he already knew my abilities and subject of my interest. For this reason, I am pursuing my bachelor’s in Biology without any regrets. Hence, people can solve their problems, by having some discussion with their near one, who know them personally and can guide them in the right way.
Furthermore, there are some problems which would be required to solve in a short time, otherwise, we may face bad consequences. At this situation, it is not appropriate to find the solution on the internet or we cannot spend much time to think about the solution. Sometimes, a solution which is given on the internet is inappropriate and may not suit our exact situation. For instance, my friend who was suffering from severe stomach ache and she tried to find out medicine from the internet. After a few days, the pain became worst and she had admitted to the hospital, because of the adverse effect of the medicine she had taken from the internet. Thus, if she would have gone hospital earlier, she might be recovered easily.
All in all, from all the aforementioned reasons, I strongly believe that my approach to problem-solving is to talk to someone about my problems. I do this because there are many people in my life who have faced the same problems, and because asking help to others who know us personally, could solve our problems efficiently.
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Suggestion: brands'; brand's
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Suggestion: had gone
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 84.0 43.0788530466 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2849.0 1977.66487455 144% => OK
No of words: 611.0 407.700716846 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66284779051 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97176167858 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59788404851 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446808510638 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 899.1 618.680645161 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6103994714 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5151515152 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236437266682 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618862556974 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550732450734 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140918172063 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041490937629 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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