When you face difficult problems in life, what do you feel is the best way to solve them?
• asking someone with more experience for advice about the problem
• finding information about the problem using the Internet
• taking a long time to think about the problem
We all in the society face numerous difficulties in our day to day life. At that crunch situation, sometimes we are unable to think properly to take decision and that time we need advices from other people. Some people argue that we should take suggestions from an experienced person, who overcome this situation, some people like to solve the problem using the information from internet and some other prefers to get rid of the problem by taking so much time for getting the solution of the problem. I personally prefer to take suggestions from experience person of my surroundings. I assert this because of few reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, sometimes we need to address the problem within very short time, otherwise we will incur great losses. In this situation, it is always convenient to take advice from a person, who went through this situation. That person is the right person to suggest which way should adapt to solve the problem, as he already overcome that situations. There might be arise some emergency situations, which do not permit us to take lengthy period to address the issues. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. few years back, my uncle had a heart attack and we have to take sudden decision where we should take him. Then I called my friend, who few months back have faced the same situations. Then he suggested me to take my uncle of Dhaka Medical College, which is a government medical college. Fortunately, my uncle got the best treatment available in our country and became fully fit. In this case, if I took long time in making decision then it might cost my uncle's life. This is why, I prefer to get advice from my close people, who have incurred the same difficulties.
Secondly, I like to take the suggestions from an experienced person. Because, our life is complex and in our journey of life, we face varieties of problem, which distinguish nature and requires special knowledge to overcome from these problems. For instance, when my nephew got the chance of getting admission in medical science and Engineering. Then we, the family members were indecisive about choosing her area of education. Then I took the advice from one my colleagues, whose son was a medical student at that time and we decided to admit my nephew to medical. Now after completing his study, he is well established and doing good in his profession.
In conclusion, I prefer to get the advice from a person, who have go through the same situation in his own life. This is so because they are the right person to make suggestion and sometimes we have to decide within very short time so that we have no enough time to take long time for decision making.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Few
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Message: Use past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
... get the advice from a person, who have go through the same situation in his own l...
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Line 4, column 302, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to take long time for decision making.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2246.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 475.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72842105263 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.615535093 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 723.6 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6702160521 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5833333333 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7916666667 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180249704908 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512373398391 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394775757036 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122360183716 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345337128413 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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