when you face difficult problems in life, which do you feel is the best way to solve them
- asking someone with more experience for advise about the problem
- finding information about the problem using the Internet.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Having problems in our lives can feel overwhelming and it may be that the last thing we want to do is face them. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely say that the Internet is the perfect source of useful information in decision making. It is my firm belief that it is a reliable source for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, the Internet has unlimited information about every possible issue we might face. Finding the right solutions to different challenges is hard because we lack experience and knowledge. Asking someone with more experience can be helpful, but we will not always find the skilled person. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. Ten years ago, when I was uncertain about what to major at university, I relied on the Internet instead of my family, friends or teachers. They wanted to help me, but they were as clueless as I was. My parents and teachers graduated from universities a long time ago and my friends were in exact situation. Therefore, they gave me very safe, and somewhat old-fashioned guidance which did not satisfy me. On the Internet, however, I could find tons of options that I could not find in my offline life. As a result, I could make better and braver decisions based on what I learned from the Internet.
Secondly, the Internet is the fastest and most effective way to develop better ideas. All creative thoughts were made upon the previous findings. It is always hard to discover something from scratch, but it is easier to borrow someone else's idea and make it our own. That is how we developed science and math. Drawing from my own experience, two years ago, when I was preparing for my dental entrance exam, I joined the Facebook NBDE group which really helped me pass my exam quick. Therefore, following ideas from that group had made me achieve my goal with in a short span of time. It is certainly clear to see why the Internet is helpful because it gives me more accurate ideas to steer in the right direction.
In light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that it is the best source for problem solving. This is because it has unlimited information and it is the fastest and effective way to find better ideas.
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Suggestion:
...ideas to steer in the right direction. In light of the above mentioned reasons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65533980583 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60364384264 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538834951456 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8668617442 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.1818181818 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.40909090909 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197674041247 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542022888352 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513618331536 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12731175799 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377112224585 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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