When you have a friend for a long time, whether you will continue the friendship even if he or she does something you do not like. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I believe that sometimes our friend will do the things we don't approve. When we are in this kind of situation, what are we going to do?If I have a friend I have known for a long time, I will continue the friendship even though she does something I don't like.
I do believe that she has a good reason for doing something i don't like. We all have this kind of experience that sometimes Our friends would do the thing we dislike. I have this friend A who is very outgoing and loves all kinds of activities, especially traveling. While I am pretty quiet and prefer to stay indoors at all times. Last summer holiday, she joined a tourist group with her and my name without my permission. When she told me, I was really mad at her being selfish just because she could save some money with more people joining it.During the trip to Hunan, I did't speak to her at first .However, I was deeply attracted by the beautiful scenery of ZhangJiaJie, all the worries were blown away. Actually i enjoyed myself a lot. On our way back home, my friend told me that she just wanted me to go out a lot. She didn't want me to be unhappy all day in the house, she thought maybe i need a way to let out my feeling. I was ashamed of my being paranoid. I guess there should be more faith between friends.
Even our old friend did something wrong, I have the faith that she will be better. When our friend did something we disapproved, she would probably make a change not doing the same thing if we show our forgiveness and help.When I was in high school, one of my friend copied my answers during the mid-term exam.After the exam, we were both called to our head teacher's office, when the teacher took out the same paper, my friend burst out that I was the one who cheated.I really didn't know how to explain the whole situation with her begging eyes looking directly at me.So i kept silent. When we walked out of the office,my friend pulled my sleeves and expressed her gratitude. I thought for a while and asked about her difficulties in studies, I offered to study with her hereinafter.From then, we studied together and discussed together. We both improved a lot. So, if our friend could do better, there is no need giving up the friendship just because of a tiny little problem.
Though some time we will meet someone who don't bother making any changes, I guess it's his loss of losing me, there is no need to worry about losing someone like that. And we can also develop the true eye of making a true friend next time.
All in all, we all are not perfect. So next time when your friend does something you don't appreciate, just think about if you could do any better in the same situation.Maybe things turn out to be good. Plus, when we went through some really ordeals, our friendship could last forever.These are the reasons why I choose to continue the friendship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, however, if, look, may, really, so, then, while, i guess, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 100.0 43.0788530466 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2328.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 529.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40075614367 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79583152331 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45156481882 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48393194707 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 28.0 9.59856630824 292% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 8.0 0.994623655914 804% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 3.51792114695 341% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 99.183331933 48.9658058833 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 97.0 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0416666667 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.5376344086 524% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256416002457 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764383158451 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902634032569 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173134670672 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089241756327 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.