Whether a person should take a long time to make decisions
From the choices an individual makes, we can anticipate one’s success and accomplishment. There is no denying that a significant decision of a person can change his entire life. As far as I am concerned, it is worthy to spend a long time on events of great importance.
Firstly, to make a perfect decision will need a lot of investigation and consideration, which will occupy a definitely long time. My personal experience is a very compelling example. Last year I was intending to buy a flat in my city where I worked. Before I decided which apartment to buy, I had done research about the real estate market of the city for a long period. I not only searched materials about flats on the internet but also had discussions with the experienced buyers. Consequently, I bought an apartment with beautiful scenery with a price lower than the average, which saved me money. Without the long time for deciding and preparing, I would never get such an amazing flat.
Secondly, considering for a longer period can avoid a person from getting cheated. Because many frauds will take the character that people usually make their decisions in a hurry without thinking, to enchant victims’ money. For instance, my grandpa wanted to invest his savings on financial products. A fraud pretended as an employee in a bank to sell his financial products with a rather high return. My grandpa decided to invest in the products instantly when the man told him that he would receive twice return than the other buyers. Finally, my grandpa lost all his money without a longer consideration.
All in all, when making an important decision, one needs to think for a long time. That is because we need to investigate before having a decision and because it can prevent us from going into the trap.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87947882736 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85301114079 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586319218241 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8204042903 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.2222222222 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211142475152 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618977941228 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067600965203 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13054176233 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309183401942 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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