Which of the following is the most important thing for a country’s leader to do to ensure the prosperity and success of the country.
1, create more jobs for the unemployed;
2, improve agriculture and lower the food prices;
3, provide affordable housing.
Which of the following is the most important thing for a country’s leader to do to ensure the prosperity and success of the country.
1, create more jobs for the unemployed;
2, improve agriculture and lower the food prices;
3, provide affordable housing.
The answer to the question that how a country's leader can ensure the success of the country can be varied from person to person. In my opinion, providing much more job opportunities in order to eliminate the unemployment is more beneficial. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, nowadays, the quality of life is becoming much more difficult. In fact, people have a lot of problems to meet their basic needs like paying bills, housing, buying a car, and so forth, all of which can be easily solved if people have a decent job. In addition, people having a great job not only can have a high quality of lives, but also can help their family members in order to become successful in their lives. An example will illustrate this viewpoint much better. When I was an undergraduate student, I decided to apply for a university abroad. Since my father had a well-paid job, he told me I would support you financially. For this reason, had my father not had a great and decent job, he could not have supported me. As a result, I strongly believe that providing job opportunities for people enable them to have better and satisfying lives.
Second, poverty and crime rate of each society have a direct relationship with the unemployment rate. In fact, if people have no job, they try to find a way such as committing offenses in order to earn money; therefore, they will be a huge threat to the security of society. Hence, this problem can be solved easily if governments provide job opportunity for them. For example, when I was a graduate student, I had a part-time job at university campus magazine as a reporter. As I remember, one time, I interviewed professor Nejati, who is a well-known psychologist in my country, about the effect of having a job in people's lives. Then, he told me that the countries which have a high unemployment rate are suffering from many crimes and poverty rates stemming from lack available jobs in their country. For this reason, the more a government provides a job for people, the less they have crime in their country.
In conclusion, no one can deny the enormous positive effect of providing a job for unemployment. Not only are they able to have a better lifestyle, but also they can live in a healthy society, which people feel more security.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, second, so, then, therefore, well, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2158.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73245614035 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78251366061 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491228070175 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 685.8 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7518951264 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0909090909 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344385551898 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117744755625 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155224593018 0.0737576698707 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253709615548 0.150856017488 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168935519993 0.0645574589148 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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