Which one do you prefer? Why?
1) a company offering you a job with challenging and interesting projects but less vacation days or
2) another company offering you a job that is not so challenging and interesting but has more vacation days.
By and large, for every adult individual having a job is an essential need in life. One may have either a part time or a full time job. In addition, jobs can be categorized based on their difficulty. As a fact, different factors can affect one's satisfaction with his job. Some people prefer to face challenging and interesting projects in their jobs at the cost of having less vacation days. However, some people look at this issue through a different lens and prefer to have a job with more vacation days although the projects may not be so challenging and interesting. From my vantage point, the latter belief is true. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
First off, it goes without saying that in such a sophisticated word where people's life style has changed and many of them are experiencing a hectic life, releasing stress and tension is of great importance. One way to do so, is going on trips and having some time off the job environment. In case an individual is intensively involved with his job and projects related to it, so that he cannot have enough vacation, the possibility of getting depressed would increase significantly. As a case in point, recently I read a psychological research. The researchers conducted an interview with successful businessmen, the data revealed that a host of them have regular and several vacations during a year. Therefore, this finding can at least partly explain why having sufficient vacation is an index of advancing in a given job.
Another equally significant reason is that, one of the main expectations of an employee, is having adequate efficiency at work. At first glance, challenging and interesting projects seem motivational factors. This might be true on the condition that the employees get the chance to have enough vacation considering the difficulties of their jobs. In long run, lack of vacation days would significantly decrease the efficiency, no matter how much the projects are interesting and challenging. In my own personal experience, I was involved in a project related to the optics field which seemed extremely exciting to me. In the first three months I was working so hard and had cancelled many vacations in order to achieve the results and finish the project sooner. Unfortunately, gradually I got tired and my eagerness turned into disappointment and finally I dropped the project. I would continue the project if I had considered a balance between my job and the allocated time to the vacations and having fun.
Finally yet importantly, the role of family in one's life should never be neglected. The main purpose of working is to have a better life alongside our families and friends. Vacation days are great opportunities to hang out and spend some time with them. Moreover, family can be a great source of positive energy and helps to reduce the stress resulted from job pressure. Consequently, reducing the vacation days would damage the family bonds and inversely affect the efficiency at job. More in detail, the statistics show that those employees who take advantage of vacations and establish a close relationship with their families and friends, are happy, creative ,and have a high tendency to follow and finish their assignments and duties at work.
To wrap it up, a job with more vacation days and less challenging and interesting projects has several priorities over those ones which offer challenging and interesting projects along with less vacation days. Releasing stress and tension, increasing the efficiency at work, and getting the chance to spend enough time with family and friends are some of the reasons which make me to incline toward choosing a job with more vacation days and less interesting projects. However, it was a story in a nutshell; It is highly recommended that a survey be conducted in order to shed light on other aspects of the importance of the relation between the job quality, the difficulty level of the projects and vacation days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ial need in life. One may have either a part time or a full time job. In addition, jobs c...
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Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...e. One may have either a part time or a full time job. In addition, jobs can be categoriz...
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Line 3, column 526, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'psychological research'.
Suggestion: psychological research
...ly. As a case in point, recently I read a psychological research. The researchers conducted an interview...
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Line 5, column 619, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... which seemed extremely exciting to me. In the first three months I was working so...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ime to the vacations and having fun. Finally yet importantly, the role of family in ...
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Line 7, column 669, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...amilies and friends, are happy, creative ,and have a high tendency to follow and f...
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Line 9, column 120, Rule ID: THESE_ONES[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'those' instead.
Suggestion: those
...ng projects has several priorities over those ones which offer challenging and interesting...
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Line 9, column 348, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...enough time with family and friends are some of the reasons which make me to incline toward...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, at least, in addition, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 36.0 13.8261648746 260% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 92.0 52.1666666667 176% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3360.0 1977.66487455 170% => OK
No of words: 670.0 407.700716846 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01492537313 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.08766726615 4.48103885553 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9003099365 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 318.0 212.727598566 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474626865672 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1053.9 618.680645161 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2108175565 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.387096774 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6129032258 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.67741935484 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340866057337 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923923914699 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998843576792 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217857214838 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10805211139 0.0645574589148 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 86.8835125448 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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