Which one do you think is the most important for high school teacher (age from 15 to 18)?
1. the ability to give students advice to plan for their future
2. the ability to find which students need help and provide them with help
3. the ability to encourage students to learn on themselves outside of the classroom
When it comes to the topic of the relationship between the most important teachers’ ability and how they can better foster the students, the first grope argue that the most important teachers’ ability are to give students advice for their future, while the second grope argue that the most important teachers’ ability are to find which students need help and provide them with help, the third grope argue that the most important teachers’ ability are to encourage students to learn on themselves outside of the classroom. I personally think each of this views are somehow extreme positions which cannot lead us to the right destination. In fact, any good teacher must has all of this abilities to foster and lead students in true way.
Admittedly, if teachers have an ability to give students advice to plan for their future are very helpful for students, because many students in age from 15 to 18 are very wandered and playful so most of them don’t have any plan for their future life, but they have special attention to their teacher and they get influence from their teacher, if teachers have an ability to give student advice to plan for their future life, it’s like a hint for them and it can help them to pay attention to essential information of their study and aware of their dedicate situation that can change all of their future life, even a little wrong decision compromising all of their future life. Therefore, it’s very important for teacher to have an ability to give students advice to plan for their future life.
Another important ability for teachers are to find which students need help and provide them with help, because the weaken students are as important as astute students, if teacher just attention to astute student it cause eliminate the competition atmosphere between all students, as the time pass the weaken student lose their attention to study material and their’ spirits began to droop; therefore, it is very important that teacher have an ability to find which students need help and provide them with help somehow the weaken students can compete with astute students.
Moreover, the other important ability for teachers are to encourage students to learn on themselves outside of the classroom, because it help student find what can they do or which subject they are interest to study in university. If students find their abilities and concentrate on their abilities and interests, they absolutely become progress in their future life. So it’s very important for teacher to have an ability to encourage students to learn on themselves outside of the classroom to find their ability and interests.
All in all, concentrating just on one of those abilities that referred in the topic cannot lead us to the proper destination, the teachers must have variety of ability to can better foster students and lead them in true way.
Comments
you should support only one
you should support only one of the options. in this essay, you assigned a paragraph for all three and it is completely wrong.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, third, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2439.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 482.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0601659751 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64604494755 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.338174273859 0.524837075471 64% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 772.2 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.1344086022 238% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 211.573178829 48.9658058833 432% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 243.9 100.406767564 243% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.2 20.6045352989 234% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.561269720653 0.236089414692 238% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.273986262869 0.076458572812 358% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111113259008 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.3495413869 0.150856017488 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944276373764 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.5 11.7677419355 225% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.76 58.1214874552 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 10.1575268817 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 10.002688172 305% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.0537634409 211% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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