Which one you prefer, travel in your country or foreign country?
When it comes to issue of the people benefit more from travelling in their country is more than the benefit from travelling to foreign country . Some people may agree with this statement and give us sound reason for their beliefs, On the other hand some other people might disagree and have different opinion. I think travelling in foreign countries is more beneficial than in our own country . this is short essay will demonstrate some points regarding my point of view
First of all I think the travelling in foreign country will help us to know how people in different side of the world live and help us to be more social and making friendship with many kinds of people not just those whom we used to live with them
Another reason why I advocate the importance of the travelling to foreign countries is to increase our knowledge by knowing new things that we did not see it or even heard about it before, like for example knowing about new job or skill so we can work with it in the future and get the priority with such job in our country
Finally it is well establish fact that travelling to foreign will make us more adopted to the change and this is so important because we may need to change our place in future so knowing about the other country will help us to detect were is better place to live in.
from what was been discussed above we can draw a conclusion which says that people whom has different opinion may have the right in their beliefs but my opinion and other people opinions is overwhelming too much to be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he priority with such job in our country Finally it is well establish fact that t...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'i think', 'first of all', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.179930795848 0.229887763892 78% => OK
Verbs: 0.207612456747 0.158761421928 131% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0934256055363 0.0866891130778 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.038062283737 0.046263068375 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0968858131488 0.0685040099705 141% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.145328719723 0.118717715034 122% => OK
Participles: 0.0484429065744 0.0351676179071 138% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.30631383709 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0449826989619 0.0309702414327 145% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.076124567474 0.0887237588012 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0346020761246 0.0209618222197 165% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0242214532872 0.0139019557991 174% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1552.0 2387.08602151 65% => OK
No of words: 284.0 408.028673835 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46478873239 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.48200974243 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.264084507042 0.338922669872 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.197183098592 0.251872472559 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.109154929577 0.174417080927 63% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.080985915493 0.112833075102 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30631383709 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492957746479 0.524397521467 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.8834483582 59.2087087015 81% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6684587814 24% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 56.8 20.5533526081 276% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 311.413551407 48.84282405 638% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 310.4 120.699889404 257% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.8 20.5533526081 276% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.4 0.644075263715 373% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.54480286738 198% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 76.5183098592 45.7405998639 167% => OK
Elegance: 1.09090909091 1.45489161554 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153902078267 0.300154397459 51% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.139841844282 0.103427244359 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.106164564669 0.0752933317313 141% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.739480676293 0.497263757937 149% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.272690322897 0.151897553556 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111721753892 0.114077575197 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817583501084 0.0781384742642 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.274615723405 0.336927656856 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0725003820246 0.067059652881 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098524749824 0.210909579961 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351232067567 0.0618886996521 57% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8870967742 34% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.42114695341 47% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 13.6433691756 37% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.