Why are group and organization important to people?
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that groups and organizations have played an important role in people's lives throughout history. As a matter of fact, these groups can provide an opportunity for people to enhance their personal and professional life and make them knowledgeable or experienced. In fact, groups and organizations could have brought various merits to the life of people like developing social skills, being skilled and so forth. In the following paragraphs, some convincing reasons will be delineated to elaborate my personal stance.
To commence with, relation and social communication are not built on a foundation of convenience and require work. Indeed, vast majorities of people suffer from the paucity of social skills. Generally phrased, the social relation is the utmost important issue among people relationship and groups or organizations could patronize people to improve this skill. For instance, crowds of people do not know how to interact and how to behave with others. But these organizations could attract individuals and provide fertile ground for them to learn a lot of skills, especially social skills. To elucidate more on this issue, if people do not be able to make a relation successfully, they will not be able to make a progress day in day out owing to the fact that good relation could guarantee people's success in near future.
Another reason that should not go unnoticed is that if people join these groups or organizations, they can learn how to be successful in the long run. To put it in another word, success is of the utmost critical important life goal for the human being that people bend over backward to achieve this goal. Although with the presence of life difficulties reaching success is like a blank dream, these groups could provide an opportunity and help individuals, especially youth to experience success in their life. Going into the depth, not only can these groups make people successful and teach them how to make a progress but also can teach them how to seize great opportunities in order to become successful.
Thirdly, culture and civilization are the symbols of every given society and these organizations could keep them alive and share significant values. As far as I am concerned, people need to know about their history or ancestors because progress could not be possible unless thinking about past time wisely. Indeed, these groups can spread out and transmit culture to the other nations all around the world.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that groups and organization play a key role in people's life and provide an opportunity for them to enhance their living condition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, third, thirdly, for instance, in fact, as a matter of fact, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2250.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12528473804 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82757393736 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489749430524 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 694.8 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7018595827 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3888888889 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307918534305 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111699827693 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095597987812 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195120375071 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642086675056 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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