Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are a plethora of reasons why students choose to attend university in this day and age. Some people consider college as a challenge and others take it as a new experience. In my opinion, I think people attend school primarily to obtain knowledge in various subjects mainly. Although their main purpose is to acquire knowledge, they also want to excel in interpersonal skills and to achieve a good career in the future.
First of all, knowledge can be attained by various ways. A college or university is the best place where one can gain knowledge and become valuable to society. Schools have expert teachers in different fields, and students can understand a particular course comprehensively from them. My own experience is a good example of this, I have been reading several books on historical events. Nonetheless, I have not a much clear concept about those events. But when I taught about those events in my history class, my teacher explains the different dynamics of those historical events. As you can see I understand much more clearly with my teacher than I did while studying on my own and I gain a good knowledge.
Furthermore, interacting with new people is always a challenge. Studying in the college make students having an opportunity to live with other students and learn how to cooperate with other people. For example, students will have a chance to get information about different cultures, different lifestyles and certain types of food is shared among students. I used to study at a university that has a good diversity of students, so I learned how to care and understand people from different culture.
Moreover, developing a career is a very important stage in our life. Most students after graduating from high schools, go to universities or college to be trained and educated. Some major in various subjects while others go for professional degrees. Universities help students in achieving their goal by preparing them for the career they have picked. If I go to a medical school, I know that the school will prepare me well enough to become a successful medical doctor.
In conclusion, I believe that young people choose to enroll in post-secondary education mostly in order to acquire more knowledge, to know how to interact with people. In addition, people go to schools because it is very important for their future work and life.
- Some students prefer classes with open discussions between the professor and students and almost no lectures. Other students prefer classes with lectures and almost no discussions. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans 70
- Tpo-4 70
- TPO-6 70
- TPO 29 Integrated writing 53
- TPO33: Integrated writing 80
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
Sentence Length SD: 5.41 7.5 //"Sentence Length SD is low" means that the essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted. and Try to use less pronouns (like 'I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 398 350
No. of Characters: 1928 1500
No. of Different Words: 203 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.467 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.844 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.797 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 154 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 110 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 74 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.091 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.41 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.297 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.514 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.105 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 690, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good knowledge'.
Suggestion: good knowledge
...did while studying on my own and I gain a good knowledge. Furthermore, interacting with new ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'nonetheless', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'first of all', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226544622426 0.229887763892 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.173913043478 0.158761421928 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0961098398169 0.0866891130778 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0343249427918 0.046263068375 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0686498855835 0.0685040099705 100% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12585812357 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0343249427918 0.0351676179071 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.88021794535 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.045766590389 0.0309702414327 148% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0732265446224 0.0887237588012 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0137299771167 0.0209618222197 65% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0160183066362 0.0139019557991 115% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2380.0 2387.08602151 100% => OK
No of words: 398.0 408.028673835 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97989949749 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.389447236181 0.338922669872 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.304020100503 0.251872472559 121% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.201005025126 0.174417080927 115% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13567839196 0.112833075102 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88021794535 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525125628141 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 58.5805400816 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0909090909 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7194718446 48.84282405 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.181818182 120.699889404 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.772727272727 0.644075263715 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 48.4929191412 45.7405998639 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.39669421488 1.45489161554 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2110507997 0.300154397459 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.094248025213 0.103427244359 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0715521471459 0.0752933317313 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.471452857496 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145811135449 0.151897553556 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715857597219 0.114077575197 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650875630823 0.0781384742642 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.250232587056 0.336927656856 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0476527157345 0.067059652881 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137022189974 0.210909579961 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570559119449 0.0618886996521 92% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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