why go to university?
Why go to university?
Education can most of the times leads to a good, well organized, and self-confident mind. It can be achieved through studying in university or self-studying. some people always wanted to learn about different topics to guide their life more sufficiently. In order to a better understanding life in this century despite old times, the best way is to educate yourself by a tight decpline, like universities.
University is like an artist, it shape the rock of human being into a invaluable sculpture. It is like a painter, which turn row drawings into a manuscript. For example, imagine a young 18 years old boy entering the university and compare him, his characteristic, his behavior, his attitude toward the life, and his skills with a 23 years old young alumni whom is graduated as a civil engineer from a prestigues university. The university gave him a path to life, which was concealed before in his mind, it helps him to grow his character by learning. Not only the physics, chemistry, strength of material but through philosophy, literature and even through his informal studying by communicate with other people; like, students, professors and even workers. The boy may even has participated with different cultural groups like music clubs, art clubs, poem gatherings these outdoor activities will help him to better understand the wide variety of life and therefore gave him various situtations.He may sometimes undergo mild stresses, for instance in final examination, but it is also another advantages of going to university, remember, can help him to bear life coming stresses.
The most ordinary advantages of universities is of course their attempts to teach a specific major to their students, for example someone is interested in being a doctor and someone else wants to be an astronaut. No matter what you choose, university can helps you through it.
In my country, Iran, studying in universities and technical schools have a history of more than 1000 years, Razi, who explored alcohol has a kind of technical school, that he tries to educate his people. Now a days most of the people in my country want to attend university, just only to find a good job for their future. Which is unfortunately a the least important advantages of a university. More over it is going to be a life routine and it is slowly going to lose the valuable aim that is addicted to the university.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Some
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Message: Did you mean 'shapes'?
Suggestion: shapes
...ties. University is like an artist, it shape the rock of human being into a invaluab...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
... matter what you choose, university can helps you through it. In my country, Iran, ...
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...l, that he tries to educate his people. Now a days most of the people in my country want t...
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ly to find a good job for their future. Which is unfortunately a the least important ...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: a; the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98024691358 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98680734857 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56049382716 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.9349804815 48.9658058833 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.647058824 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8235294118 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205090698582 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103244359051 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.229732091481 0.0737576698707 311% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269659806242 0.150856017488 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.366117474686 0.0645574589148 567% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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