Under the advent of technology, many innovations have been created in order to help people experience the world in a better way. One of the most impact innovation is the internet, and it helps people the access to the wealth of human knowledge on a new level. It also makes communicate become much easier. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, the internet has become the source of information for many people on the planet. The ease of use and the widespread of the internet has made the process of acquiring new information becomes as much simple as possible. Instead of running down to the nearest bookstore or the central library in a university, one can simply get the book by clicking on a few button on a website. As a student, this simple act helps me in many ways. Just a few click away, student nowadays can download almost everything that they needed while staying at home or even a thousand miles away from their school. My story would be a good example for this. When I was studied as a graduate student in a foreign country, I received a phone call from my parent, telling me that my grandma had passed away. Grabbing as much as personal things that I could, I booked the red-eye to travel back to my hometown in order to be there on time for the funeral. That was the end of November and I still have one report on the mechanism of Alzheimer's that due in a week. Using the internet and through the university portal, I have the access to the central library of my university while being at home. Thank the internet, I had submitted the article on time with enough references and supporting details that help me pass that course.
Secondly, the internet has eliminated the obstruction of distance. In the past, the only way for people to communicate is via mail or phone call. Nowadays, we have skype, facebook, and many more others services at hand ready for us. This particular aspect of the internet has brought everyone closer to each other. The story of my brother and me could be vivid examples for this. Studying in a foreign country is very hard, especially when you are alone in the holiday, apart from family and friend. Using chat and video call like skype, my brother and I can talk and see our parent at home as loud and clear as day. The moral support via skyping is the one that helps us getting by all five years in graduate school. Without the internet, we might have to stumble on a mental problem or even consider quitting school at one point.
In conclusion, the use of internet has helped many people experience the world on the whole new level, including, but not limited to the easy access to the well of knowledge and consolidate people connection.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... details that help me pass that course. Secondly, the internet has eliminated th...
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Line 5, column 673, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to get' or 'get'.
Suggestion: to get; get
...rt via skyping is the one that helps us getting by all five years in graduate school. W...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, apart from, i feel, in conclusion, on the whole, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2260.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 498.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53815261044 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52075784105 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512048192771 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 720.0 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6955211579 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.92 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170121479496 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487168423153 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509224378361 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119670193408 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394010706479 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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