is wining the most important aspect of playing a game?
Before tendering my opinion, I guess we need to take quick glance on this argument on both sides. Some people they don't care about getting game, But others believe that being successful is much important than just participate in a game. In my perspective I concur with the first group which they agree that the participation in any kind of games consider success. That what seems very reasonable to me because of numerous reasons why I subscribed to a distinct attitude elaborating cogently in subsequent paragraphs.
The first reason coming to my mind consolidating my stand point is nowadays, is explain certain kind of technology we have unlimited access to look for several type of games like for instance some people prefer playing tennis, soccer games. But others like to play basketball, golf, or even computer games. To be more specific if someone playing certain type of games must focuse on that game instead of being much emotional and distracted. So that’s why we should proud of ourselves if we participate in any game without getting the first grade.
Second reason we have to give it some attention is every person in this entire world has his own character and vision in this world. If people want to win in every single game that will not add any changes in their personal life. Moreover, without failure there is no win. For example, many studies claimed that people seeking for being winners are less intelligence, un-socialized and much less creative as well. In contrast to other people whose believe with the participating in games much important than prevail the game, whose are much creative and they have conversational skills.
Additionally, one of the scientist poses that whatever people like to play, they still considered achievable. In my opinion, focusing on achieving people’s goal and improving them-selves in any game they prefer getting easier and comfortable life full of thrives and properties. Furthermore, losing games is not the end of the world. People should learn from any kind of looseness and mistakes they’ve been done.
To put it briefly, I strongly agree that defeating games not only important thing in this life, that argument can help obsessive people to improve critical thinking, and breeds them better future in order that achieves their goals. In a nutshell, in fact, explain other factors supplementing the aforementioned statements, which could be alluded here, but are not embraced due to the dearth of time.
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...own character and vision in this world. If people want to win in every single game...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, so, still, well, for example, for instance, i guess, in contrast, in fact, kind of, in contrast to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13267813268 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86539372481 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572481572482 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8010791447 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.947368421 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4210526316 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21052631579 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173434321165 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572845344241 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541106098515 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100623074989 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310831002158 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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