Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, there are many different tasks in companies which workers have to perform every day. While some workers want to do various works during their workday, others prefer to do similar jobs. As far as I am concerned, I believe that workers should do related tasks. The reasons why I think so will be elaborated upon hereunder.
First of all, when people do similar jobs in a workday, they learn it more quickly and thoroughly, so they can get specialized in those tasks. Since workers do analogous works over and over every day, they know about potential problems of the jobs. They will become very innovative, and this will lead to higher productivity. As a result, they can get promotions and make more money. My own example will illustrate this. About twenty years ago, My father worked in a carpet company. He had a routine job there for a long time. He did his job repeatedly for several years that he could do it even with his eyes closed, and much more faster. He got so good that the company doubled his revenue and became the chief of that part of the company.
Second, by repeating the same tasks every day, people can concentrate better and avoid unexpected dangers. When workers do similar jobs every day, they will learn which part of their job needs more attention and is more dangerous. So, they will concentrate harder on those parts every day, so much so that it becomes a habit for them. In contrast, when people do different tasks every day, sometimes they can not entirely focus on their job. Because the work environment is dangerous, they might get injured seriously. For example, ten years ago, I was working in a shoe factory. One of the workers worked in both packing the shoes and the compressing part. Those jobs were very different from each other and needed quite a lot of attention. One day he was swamped in the packing section, but he had to do the compression part too. He accidentally left his hand under the compressor, and unfortunately lost four of his fingers.
In conclusion, with all this taken into account, I strongly believe that workers should do similar tasks in their workdays. By doing so, they will get very competent in their job, and they will be much safer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
Nowadays, there are many different tasks in companies which workers have t...
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Line 2, column 640, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... his eyes closed, and much more faster. He got so good that the company doubled hi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6726342711 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46442496635 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516624040921 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3598107248 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.08 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.64 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88709677419 307% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333406859984 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941744333084 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860220898933 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231075887668 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02591012393 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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