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Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Whereas some workers like to do similar tasks all day long, I believe that it is more satisfying for workers to have many different types of tasks during the workday. I feel so for two reasons that I will further explore in the following essay.
Firstly, doing many tasks during the workday contributes to more productivity. In other words, workers will not feel bored because of tasks assigned to them. Because every time they start a different task, they would feel challenged and exert their ultimate effort with excitement so they would finish the task. Accordingly, they feel accomplished and self-satisfied, which in return will enhance their urge for more tasks and accomplishments. Take my personal experience as an illustration of this concept. I needed my son to help with cleaning his room. However, he didn't approve of helping me because he believed these tasks were so boring. Thus, I decided to give him various tasks that would look more appealing to him. For instance, I assigned him to clean the windows then collect his toys, and so on. By encouraging this, he assumed he was doing different chores rather than just cleaning his room. If I hadn't assigned him to diverse tasks, he wouldn't have helped me.
Secondly, achieving many tasks during the workday gives the workers a reason to show up the next morning and finish these tasks. They would end their working day unconsciously thinking about finishing these tasks the next morning. Accordingly, they are more enthusiastic to wake up every morning of the weekdays. Not to mention, this will eventually increase their productivity. On the other hand, doing similar tasks during the workday will decrease their energy throughout the week. Probably they might even ask for sick leave various times. For instance, when I started working as a dentist, I was assigned to only scaling and polishing. At first, I was satisfied because I was learning a new skill. After some time, I lost my interest in accepting patients and performing the same task repeatedly. Furthermore, I began to wake up late, even took many days off. If my boss assigned me various tasks during the weekday, I wouldn't have felt less energetic.
To sum up, doing many different tasks rather than similar tasks boosts the workers' productivity. Not only because they feel more achieved, but it gives them a reason to wake up every morning and show up for work.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, thus, whereas, for instance, i feel, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92098765432 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66871891766 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508641975309 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4442775102 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.6538461538 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5769230769 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73076923077 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394736129052 0.236089414692 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106777278753 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113448557883 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289298429932 0.150856017488 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656685754588 0.0645574589148 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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