There are many ways to keep a worker active and eager to go to work every day. In my opinion, I agree with this statement, since the satisfaction of a job is given by the actions one performs throughout the day. The reasons why I feel this way will be explained in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, when a person performs different kinds of activities in their works, they are learning something new every single day that brings satisfaction indirectly. This diversity of tasks even helps workers develop new skills. My personal experience is a great example of this. Last year, I was working in Walmart as an assistant, every day a person asked me for something different, and even if I didn't know everything, I was always in action, helping in different sections, without a pattern, like cashiers for example, and there, I developed my communication skills, how to improvise for the customer's sake, and each day I had fun as I was satisfied for my job. If I had not decided to be a multi-task worker I would not have developed new abilities.
Secondly, if a person has a multi-task work, that person is likely to be more active all day. This kind of behavior is developed because the brain is working throughout the day. A few months ago, one research confirmed that when you decide to keep the brain active, it will improve your mood, even your physical and mental health and you will be satisfied doing your job. Maria, a friend of mine, decided to quit her work at home to become a sports journalist. Her job is not easy, she has to do many things, such as contacting managers, interviews with athletes, going to different clubs, among other things. This routine was difficult to adapt to at first, but now she even feels like she is living a healthier life, since she has literally no time to procrastinate, she finds herself loving her job and looking forward to going to work every single day. If she had not found a multi-task job, she would not have ended up liking her new job and being satisfied with what she does each day.
In conclusion, I agree with this statement that people who have different kinds of tasks to do during the day are more satisfied. It is because having many tasks brings you the opportunity to learn new things and develop new skills, at the same time, a research explains that keeping the brain busy doing different actions will improve your health and give you satisfaction at the end of the day.
- TPO 32 Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- the possible sources of strange sounds so called quackers hearing by sailors in the North Atlantic and Arctic Ocean 76
- tpo 32 the quackers sound 70
- TOFEL TPO52 80
- Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... for something different, and even if I didnt know everything, I was always in action...
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Line 3, column 602, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
...cation skills, how to improvise for the customers sake, and each day I had fun as I was s...
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Line 3, column 672, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... had fun as I was satisfied for my job. If I had not decided to be a multi-task wo...
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Line 5, column 443, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ed to quit her work at home to become a sports journalist. Her job is not easy, she ha...
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Line 7, column 252, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...d develop new skills, at the same time, a research explains that keeping the brain busy do...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61556064073 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60618932956 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485125858124 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.4717825106 48.9658058833 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.647058824 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7058823529 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225887226874 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803046419249 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580938431731 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144361685178 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559712497419 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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