The development of the Internet and electronic devices liberated people from one certain working place. Some people claim that it is better to work at home by computer and telephone than in an office and I agree with it.
Granted woking in an office sometimes makes the communication more convenient. Especially for the projects need always exchange ideas, employees who are working next door or even next desk, could make discussions and have meetings at any time.
However, working at home has more advantages like saving time and money. It costs much time to commute back and forth to the office in the congested big cities, like waiting in a line for the bus or being stuck in traffic jam. On the contrary, working at home has no such problems bothered, one just needs to turn on the computer and make some calls, start to work within even five minutes after getting up. In addition, transportation and clothes cost would be saved without going to the office. Bus or subway tickets, although it is not much for once, but it could be much considering of accumulation, no mention the car’s gasoline and parking fee. Besides, working in an office building requires dressed up delicately, so employees have to spend much on proper clothes. While working at home alone, one just needs to seat in front of the desk with the leisure wear without stepping out of the door.
Moreover, working at home has a positive impact on one’s mood thus improve the working efficiency. Since working at home may avoid the conflicts between colleagues like fighting or sexual harassment, which are common in an office. For instance, my sister is a magazine editor, she used to work in office while usually had some arguments on trifles with one of her co-workers, which affected her mood and work on some level. Then she started to work at home after she got pregnant, she never fight with her colleague since she did not have to meet her everyday, as a result, she became much delighted than before and her assignments were usually beyond her boss’s expectation.
All in all, although working in an office is sometimes convenient for team work, working at home is more relaxed, efficient and economical. Therefore home working with computer and telephone is better than working in an office, and it tends to be a trend in the near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... than in an office and I agree with it. Granted woking in an office sometimes ma...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: COMMUTE_BACK_AND_FORTH[1]
Message: Use simply 'commute'.
Suggestion: commute
...g time and money. It costs much time to commute back and forth to the office in the congested big citi...
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Line 5, column 705, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "requires dressed" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'dressing' or 'to be dressed'.
Suggestion: dressing; to be dressed
... working in an office building requires dressed up delicately, so employees have to spe...
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Line 7, column 497, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'fights'.
Suggestion: fights
... home after she got pregnant, she never fight with her colleague since she did not ha...
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Line 7, column 557, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ague since she did not have to meet her everyday, as a result, she became much delighted...
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Line 9, column 141, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...more relaxed, efficient and economical. Therefore home working with computer and telephon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84328358209 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59423160547 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534825870647 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5216793349 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.529411765 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6470588235 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.517400198025 0.236089414692 219% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187975957781 0.076458572812 246% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157758366753 0.0737576698707 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329956197464 0.150856017488 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163824709102 0.0645574589148 254% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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