You are helping to select a leader for a student organization or a group. Do you think a person’s honesty is the most important characteristic for being a leader?
There are a diverse range of features that make a person appropriate for leadership position. A substantial number of people take the view that honestly is the most important characteristic for being a leader. However, I take the issue with this widespread belief due to some reasons. I will elaborate upon the momentous reasons in the following paragraphs.
First, so knowledgeable a person is the best choice for being a leader. It is my firm conviction that a well-educated person who has monumental amount of knowledge can guide other as best as possible. To illustrate this more, I would like to give an example of this. I have gone a part time jobs recently in a computer company which is one of the well-known computer company in my home town. Whenever my co-workers and I get into the trouble, our boss who has a genetic flair for computer helps us. Had he had too prosaic a mind, he would have not been able to help us. Deeming a situation that the leader has too prosaic a mind and he honestly acknowledge his weaknesses; how would others benefit from this? Hence, the more knowledge a leader enjoys, the more successful he would be in his position.
Second, the ability to manage and control different situation is another important feature of a leader. It is common knowledge that too successful leader is a person able to govern a great many people. To pave the way for this example, I would like to give an example of this. I have jointed an organization recently in which we have plan to help our societies through volunteer activities. Although our leader is an honest person, he is not a successful leader since he is not able to control the members of the group. As an instant, last week the opinions was divided on whether to help eight to fifteen-year- old children or older. It caused a great deal of friction; I strongly believe that it was his weakness that could not make the atmosphere relax. In my view, a leader should be able to control the situation even by telling some white lie. In a word, having leadership skill, a person would do its best in a leader ship position.
In the final analysis, according to above-mentioned points and examples, I subscribe to the opinion that there are other important characters for a leader rather than honestly including knowledge and leadership abilities. I highly recommend to choose a leader which has significant amount of knowledge. Besides, having leadership abilities, a leader would be successful to guide others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 281, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... give an example of this. I have gone a part time jobs recently in a computer company whi...
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Line 2, column 645, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'acknowledges'.
Suggestion: acknowledges
... has too prosaic a mind and he honestly acknowledge his weaknesses; how would others benefi...
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Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
... organization recently in which we have plan to help our societies through volunteer...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o its best in a leader ship position. In the final analysis, according to above-...
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Line 4, column 232, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend choosing'.
Suggestion: recommend choosing
...edge and leadership abilities. I highly recommend to choose a leader which has significant amount o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, honestly, however, if, second, so, well, as to, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2062.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77314814815 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85124677925 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488425925926 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.0 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4421493671 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9166666667 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268763847384 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812708226308 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746090178801 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180025291925 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336876341093 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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