You have been asked for some suggestions to make your hometown better place. What suggestions would you make and why?
Every person consider that many ways to ameliorate the quality of living in their cities are need it. If I were asked to choose suggestions to make my hometown better place I would point several opportunities to rejuvenate the overall vision of the city and i will explain them in the following essay.
First and foremost, healthcare of citizens is essential, therefore I would recommend one hospital in each neighborhood so they will be sufficient. In this way we can stave off chaotic movement of ambulances from one part of the city to other or trapping into congestion, while a severely sick person is in and he relies on fast emergent examination. Moreover, building up a number of hospitals can provide many job opportunities for healthcare workers.
Another way of to make my city better place is by reducing the pollution, which has engulfed the whole urban territory. For the purpose, all factories that cause noise as well, should not be in vicinity to restaurants, museums, malls and sports centers. Instead, they must be located at off city areas, where people pass only by cars. Positive effect on the pollution will be by demolishing old soviet building which don't have functions nowadays, and constructing parks, zoos and greenery areas. This in turn, will create a wonderful and peaceful environment for pedestrianize or people practicing sports in their routine, like jogging.
Additionally, we as a citizens and social individuals want to have amenities within communities. No one can deny that the life will be improved with the availability of shopping centers, eating out places and more sports facilities. Thus, it will have positive effect not only on national economy, but also indigenous or tourists will be satisfied and happy.
In conclusion, I would say that live in my hometown can be much better as we have enough hospitals, cause there is nothing more important than health status. Also, reducing the pollution by supplanting in-city factories and unnecessary edifices and building up national parks. And last way is to boost up the economy by making restaurants, amenities for kids or trendy sport centers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9003408723 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595441595442 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.555865266 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.125 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9375 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153714894212 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492766839145 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637880804788 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925232290914 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584587558203 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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