You have been told that dormitory rooms at the university must be shared by two students.Would you rather have the university assign a student to share a room with you, or would you rather choose your own roommate?Wh?. Use specific reasons and details to explain your answers.
When It comes to the issue If would You like to choose a roommate or give that labor to the university?.Students give surely different reason for their selection, and many of them have certain reasons for this question. In my opinion, choosing the person who will share the room with is an advantage because You are able to ask him things for living in a harmony.I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, before starting to share your room is valid to ask for his habits. Knowing that We are able to make a sure clear decision so if this aspect is compatible with your behavior You will share your room. On the other hand, if this point of view is not enough to clear doubts perhaps He has very little likelihood of share the room because of this way You will avoid upsetting in the future.My own experience is a compelling example of this.When I was attending university in Lima, which is the largest city in my country.I used to live alone in my room inside the campus but suddenly We were noticed that all rooms must be shared. In order to increase the students' population but I had an option that I could choose my roommate so I made a test for measuring their hygiene habits, each one was sent for sharing the room. As the result of testing their custom, I chose Rodrigo who has many values in common with me. For this reason, I strongly believe that It is worthwhile to select a roommate suitable with your habits.
Secondly, choosing someone who has a lot in common with me is better in order to make a lasting relationship.Moreover, You can participate in activities that you are both interested in, and, as result enjoy your time.For example, my cousin had a roommate at University PUCP in Perú, while I was pursuing my studies as a system engineer.We both had a burning desire to take a trip and know New Zeland, which is the farthest country, have beautiful sky view at night and scenes of the movie The Lord of the ring were filmed there. As result of this wish, after graduating, We made It possible this trip and We really got a lot of enjoyment at that time.I think that is the best share the same ideas with your roommate due to the fact timing could more enjoyable.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that is better select our roommate. This is because roommate becomes part of our entire student life, this way would be a nicer time and filled with knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48423423423 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.605647558 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515765765766 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.1344086022 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.578020031 48.9658058833 279% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.916666667 100.406767564 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 20.6045352989 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8333333333 5.45110844103 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307677406764 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113414200137 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644165535015 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185015756744 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700337104153 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 11.7677419355 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.3 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.0537634409 167% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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