You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.
For many years we've been told that we must invest our money in purchasing a business, that iis highly important and probably the only priority we should keep in mind when we start getting an income. However I disagree with it and choose buying a house, and my reasons are as follows.
To begin with, I've always dreamed about working from home as a distance, independent freelancer; so spending money in purchasing a physical business isn't really a priority for me since I can do my work from home. For example, I'm a graduated student with a bachelor in computer Science, working in the programming field. I only need a computer to code my tasks, and I prefer coding in a space that will not make me feel as stressed as a working in an office. And since I get in touch with my clients through e-mails, a physical place to meet it's not extremely required in my field.
The second reason why I would rather spending my money in acquire a house, is because I would love to have my own, personal space to live in. when you live abroad, it's more likely common to rent floors, since it is not easy to buy something at first sight. I've shared rooms with countless unknown people, and sometimes this can make me feel quite uncomfortable. buying a house would decrease that feeling because I would be living alone, or with a person I truly know.
And lastly, buying a house could be the perfect opportunity for me to get closer to my partner since we have planned for a long time to move in together. we've been in a distance relationship for a couple of years now and it has been a goal for us to share a space for the two of us, and it feels like now it's time to make this a reality.
In summary, while many people may agree that buying a house is less attractive than buying a business, I think it's really important to have a personal space for developing and feeling comfortable; feeling like this is more important than anything else, perhaps tomorrow you decide to close your business, but your house will be the only place that you will go to at the end of the day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: we've
For many years weve been told that we must invest our money...
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Suggestion: However,
...n mind when we start getting an income. However I disagree with it and choose buying a ...
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Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to buy'.
Suggestion: to buy
.... However I disagree with it and choose buying a house, and my reasons are as follows....
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Suggestion: I've
...asons are as follows. To begin with, Ive always dreamed about working from home ...
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Suggestion: isn't
...money in purchasing a physical business isnt really a priority for me since I can do...
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Suggestion: I'm
... can do my work from home. For example, Im a graduated student with a bachelor in ...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...rough e-mails, a physical place to meet its not extremely required in my field. ...
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
... The second reason why I would rather spending my money in acquire a house, is because...
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Suggestion: I've
...t easy to buy something at first sight. Ive shared rooms with countless unknown peo...
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Suggestion: Buying
...s can make me feel quite uncomfortable. buying a house would decrease that feeling bec...
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...g alone, or with a person I truly know. And lastly, buying a house could be the ...
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...ed for a long time to move in together. weve been in a distance relationship for a c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, lastly, may, really, second, so, while, for example, i think, in summary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39220779221 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46062738566 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503896103896 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.6768276854 48.9658058833 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.076923077 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6153846154 20.6045352989 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186037135847 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065369647632 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652216426463 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10983621396 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724635602209 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.