Undoubtedly, friends are one of the most important of parts in every person's life and they can impact on characteristic of individual. Friends can change path of life either good or bad and people should try to choose a good friend that learn excellent things them. Having a good friend is a gift and we must keep it. Strongly, I believe that a really friend not only modify his behavior with you but also he tries not to do something that upset you.
First and foremost, we should try that our friend should be aware of his mistake and with our behavior indirectly we say that not repeat again. After that if he do not understand, we will say directly about his behavior. In fact, talking with friends can best way for correct behavior because of they can better apprehend each other. To illustrate, one time one of the my friends did something that I was ruffled and I showed his behavior not correct with silence, but he repeat again this behavior and I forced said his directly. Fortunately, my friend accepted his mistake and promise me that not be repeated. Hence, it is crystal- clear that talking with friends is a good way for eliminate boredom.
Moreover, having good friends are gift and we cannot leave them for smallest mistake. Mankind is fallible and good friends must correct the mistake with together. Totally, friends can evolve with reminder each other's bad behaviors and with ameliorate it. According to recent research done in my country talking with friends about their wrong has better result instead of to fly into a rage and to break out relationship with them. Actually, Diaoku, the first Median king, once claimed that "a good friend is like a mirror for improve your character". Thus, Sustainable friendships will not be lost by doing something that we don’t like instead of we try to not repeat our wrong behavior.
On the whole, according to the above- mentioned points and details, friendships will not be lost by smallest mistake instead of they will be correct. Friend should have to tolerate criticism and accept it. A real friend modify his behavior for avoid frustration of his friends. Totally, friends can easily communicate together and resolve their conflict.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Delara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...of the most important of parts in every persons life and they can impact on characteris...
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Line 1, column 344, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('really') instead an adjective, or a noun ('friend') instead of another adjective.
... must keep it. Strongly, I believe that a really friend not only modify his behavior with you b...
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Line 1, column 452, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ies not to do something that upset you. First and foremost, we should try that o...
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Line 2, column 131, Rule ID: REPEAT_AGAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'repeat'.
Suggestion: repeat
...our behavior indirectly we say that not repeat again. After that if he do not understand, we...
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Line 2, column 162, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...that not repeat again. After that if he do not understand, we will say directly ab...
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Line 2, column 286, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...iends can best way for correct behavior because of they can better apprehend each other. To ill...
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Line 2, column 366, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
...h other. To illustrate, one time one of the my friends did something that I was ruffle...
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Line 2, column 473, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'repeats'.
Suggestion: repeats
...havior not correct with silence, but he repeat again this behavior and I forced said h...
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Line 2, column 473, Rule ID: REPEAT_AGAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'repeat'.
Suggestion: repeat
...havior not correct with silence, but he repeat again this behavior and I forced said his dir...
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Line 4, column 357, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...te together and resolve their conflict.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, really, so, thus, in fact, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87301587302 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58490924984 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489417989418 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2395208941 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343327330832 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115006631852 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600186157793 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226452319176 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577289454752 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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