If I had to travel 40 miles away from my home I would be considering the following means of transportations: a car, bicycle and bus. Every of this methods of transportation has advantages as well as disadvantages. In this essay I will analyze all of them and present my view in favor of traveling by a car.
Traveling by bus brings many benefits. First of all, one does not have to drive. So, I can just relax and enjoy the view from my window. Second of all, it is cheaper. I will not have to buy gasoline or pay for the car insurance. However, traveling by bus has a few disadvantages as well. For example, I will have to follow the bus schedule. Another important aspect, I will not be able to arrange the speed or make a stop when I need to.
From the other hand, traveling by bicycle is a great exercise. Secondly, it is pollution free. However, It can take too much time and at the end of my trip I will be tired and exhausted. In addition, I will most likely need a shower and some rest.
In contrast, traveling by car brings many advantages. First of all, I can arrange my speed as I want to. If I am in a hurry I will speed up a little. Otherwise, if I am not in a hurry, I can make some stops and enjoy the surroundings or have a lunch in the nearest bar. Second of all, I do not depend on a schedule like with traveling by bus. So, I can start my trip when and where I want to. In addition to those practical benefits, traveling by car is the fastest way. Another important aspect of this if I am traveling with my friends, we can talk, listen to the radio we like and discuss everything we want. A car can give us privacy. Of cause, I will have to pay for gasoline and traveling by car is not as save as traveling by bicycle or bus but I think it can not change my mind.
To sum up, I think that I would choose to travel by car. It is more convenient and offers a great amount of advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...tions: a car, bicycle and bus. Every of this methods of transportation has advantage...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...l, I can arrange my speed as I want to. If I am in a hurry I will speed up a litt...
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Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rrange my speed as I want to. If I am in a hurry I will speed up a little. Otherw...
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Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: HAVE_A_BREAKFAST[1]
Message: When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: 'have lunch'.
Suggestion: have lunch
...ome stops and enjoy the surroundings or have a lunch in the nearest bar. Second of all, I do...
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Line 7, column 641, Rule ID: OF_CAUSE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'of course' (=naturally)?
Suggestion: Of course
...ing we want. A car can give us privacy. Of cause, I will have to pay for gasoline and tr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i think, in addition, in contrast, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.10638297872 4.8611393121 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61589666201 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44414893617 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6454117464 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.1851851852 100.406767564 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.9259259259 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.03703703704 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137511511557 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429269036532 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453161576992 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942408997137 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036963544344 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.9 11.7677419355 42% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 58.1214874552 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.1575268817 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.97 10.9000537634 55% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.26 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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