"Young people enjoy life more than old people." Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Perhaps my opinion is not very objective, being a young person myself, but I agree with the statement--young people enjoy life more than older people do, and I have many reasons for my belief.
Young people are at a very different stage of life than older people. They hardly have any responsibilities; they are dependant on their parents for almost everything, ranging from finances to food to having a roof over their heads. This gives them more of an opportunity to live life unencumbered, resulting in a more care-free attitude. This leaves them free to pursue hobbies, pleasures, adventures--a luxury that older people do not have, as they are busy worrying about money and survival of their families.
Young people are usually in the prime of their lives, which also translates to being healthy. Older people start developing diseases, which may restrict them from moving around and doing new things. For example, my mother suffers from Rheumatoid Arthritis and is fifty years old. This prevents her from accompanying the family to treks and adventures.
As society and technology are moving forward, new ways of spending time are coming up. Our parents and grandparents cannot imagine owning i-Pads and mobile phones, with everything and everyone just one click away. We can use technology to explore new avenues, be it playing video games or bingewatching shows on Netflix, both of which take us to a whole new world. Books are more accessible nowadays as compared to our parents' time when they had to go to libraries and were able to read only a limited amount of books, depending on how big the library was. Nowadays, we can instantly send ebooks to our various devices.
Older people tend to have a "I've seen it all" attitude, whereas young adults are always ready to learn and explore new paths. This difference in attitude is a big thing as most old people will not give any new opportunity a chance.
These are some of the reasons why I believe young people enjoy life more. I am aware that this is only a personal opinion, and ultimately, every person has different likes and dislikes, and different definitions of what they call "enjoyment", irrespective of their age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02702702703 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83745171118 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597297297297 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9003214169 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.45110844103 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260904745977 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081480071399 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088989383651 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14480746576 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916159668112 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.