young people enjoy life more than older people do
When do we actually enjoy our life? This question has been one of the most asked questions throughout out lifetime. Personally, I believe that young people tend to enjoy more rather than the older people. I feel so for two important reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, enjoyment is the feeling that any people feel when they are liking something and situations are favoring them. People tend to be happy and excited when their needs and desires are fulfilled. The amount of happiness and excitement decreases as we have more duties and responsibilities. Childhood is the phase of our life, where we are free from several tensions and obligations to be carried out. Our life would be moving in the way we want so, children are found to be happier than the adults. For instance, during our childhood we play with our friends and do whatever we want, we won’t have any duties and obligations that has to performed. Our mind would be having no tension and problems. I use to be very happy during my childhood days than I am today, this is because I have several obligations to be fulfilled.
Furthermore, as we grow older we have to be involved in several activities- we have to earn for our living, we have to establish our own carrier, study and experience are also equally important. Among these several things we forget to enjoy our life. Actually, our life would be dull and will not be functioning properly. We may be so much involved in our work that may lead to hypertension and other form of mental disorder. My fathers experience is the compelling example of this. Since, my father has to run the family and has to take care of the children’s and handle his business, its very difficult for him to allocate time for entertainment and other works. His life has been running as though a machine is working continuously. So, from these examples we learn that people enjoys his or her life better during the childhood only.
Some people may argue that older people can also enjoy their life but, their claim is illogical and based on incorrect assumptions. In conclusion, I strongly believe that people tend to enjoy life during the nascent days rather than in older ages. This is because true happiness is obtained when we are free from any tension and because during or older age we are so much busy and life is complicated as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... feeling that any people feel when they are liking something and situations are favoring t...
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Line 3, column 715, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ld be having no tension and problems. I use to be very happy during my childhood da...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70644391408 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6552983241 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484486873508 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2390788659 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7391304348 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2173913043 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04347826087 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284977503235 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100656070468 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124422284316 0.0737576698707 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236805908012 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114376214962 0.0645574589148 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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