Young people enjoy life more than older people do
Everybody deserves to be happy in life but happiness has different defination to different people. Similarly the defination of enjoyment vary from person to person. It may seem like young people enjoy life more than older people but older people also enjoy life in their own way.
First and foremost, it is quite obvious that young people enjoy life more than older people do. It is because young people starts to experience new things in life and while doing so young people tend to see life in different way which gives them enthusiasm. Another reason is young people have so much energy in them that they can do anything with full energy. For example, hiking and skiing can be a great source of enjoyment and as these things require a lot of energy so young people are more likely to enjoy these things. Moreover, as young people live with their parent or most of them have support of their family they have less things to worry about. When someone has less things to worry aobut in their life, they can enjoy life more easily than those who have so many things going on in their head. Another factor is, as young people have their family support they tend to take more risks to do differneit things in life which ultimately give them enjoyment and happiness.
On the contrary, older people have many things to manage and handle in life like settling their family, looking after childern, maintaining job, worrying for the future. As so many things goes on in their head, it is less easier for them to enjoy life and forget all their worries. Again, as a person gets older sickness starts to attack their body which deteroit their health. So in such conditions, older people can not enjoy life to the fullest.
But this scenario is not true always. It is often seen that older people can enjoy their life more. For example, when a person's children get adult and everybody get settle in their life then parents finally get the chance to relax in their life. So we often see that old couples go for world tour or travelling around the world, relAxing as they dont have many things to worry about. Again some people work all their life and savings they start to travel or settle somewhere else which seems more peaceful to them. Sometimes many people start to fulfill their dream which they couldn't do in their young age because of circumstances like joining a bakery class or start painting or take guitar classes or anything that gives them pleasure.
There's no particular time to enjoy life but in most of the cases young people enjoy life more but it doesn't refute the idea that old people donot enjoy their life. With appropriate environment and willpower, life can be enjoyed anytime a person wants.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Similarly,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, may, moreover, similarly, so, then, thus, while, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2235.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66597077244 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13932168626 2.67179642975 80% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438413361169 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 695.7 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8734091798 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.590909091 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7727272727 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.541522065418 0.236089414692 229% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.223298895132 0.076458572812 292% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.209248222112 0.0737576698707 284% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.386534263895 0.150856017488 256% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12363106066 0.0645574589148 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.