Everyone usually enjoy their lives and sometimes they spend their time in different things.
I disagree that young people enjoy life more than older people do.
I have two reasons and I will explain in this essay.
First of all, these days, young people almost study harder than older people.
The standard of education goes up every day so we should study more and more until at dawn. For example I did. In examination period we prepare exam all day, we almost don’t have rest time.
Second, younger people go to school and after school they go to the academy until night.
and we must do homework. For example, if we don’t do homework academy won’t accept us anymore. Thus, we do homework everyday.
As a result, and I think that’s why young people don’t enjoy their lives more than older people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, thus, for example, i think, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 15.1003584229 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 52.1666666667 23% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 699.0 1977.66487455 35% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 142.0 407.700716846 35% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92253521127 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 4.48103885553 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32617263997 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 212.727598566 42% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 618.680645161 35% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1043442668 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.25 100.406767564 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8333333333 20.6045352989 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42964891432 0.236089414692 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165655374428 0.076458572812 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.253198068432 0.0737576698707 343% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229389810492 0.150856017488 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.288398926317 0.0645574589148 447% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 58.1214874552 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 86.8835125448 30% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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