Young people enjoy life more than older people do
Simply, young people have a less experience as compared to older people. Older people have passed the different hurdles, sufferings, and breakthroughs in their life. I believe with the statement that young people want to entertain more as compared to old people. I feel this way for the two reasons, which I would explore in the following essays.
To begin with, young people are generally healthy with respect to old people. As a result, they were more vigorous and energetic too. They want to show their full potential and boost their tendency. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. In my home, I am 27 years younger than as compared to my both parents. My father and mother were weak than me. They also like to celebrate and enjoy. Due to their health and other different psychological problems, they do not go with my pub on Friday evening. However, they used to celebrate when they were young or my age. Despite their interest to eat to drinks, they could not drink due to the ulcer.
Finally, young people are in the beginning phase of life. While in the same aspect, older people have already passed this phase. Consequently, they were in satiety. For instances. My friends father used to sing in the opera when he was young. He spent 20 years singing in the pub and like this place. He used to relax and live free life during this period. After all, he has no feeling about it and left all the physical things in the world. Now, he used to start worship, and meditate in the name of the god, and left all the physical things, which we should have to left one day. And, the majority of the family can be seen in the same scenario. When they became older, they used to lives the retired life after becoming free all of the tension and different sorts of things. Moreover, we human does not like to engage in the same activities all the time or to be a monotonous. Every person generally celebrates when they are young, and abate this habit after becoming old.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that young people celebrate as compared to the older because young people are feckless so why wants to live the life with full of pleasure, and because older people have already transit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 239, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...at young people wants to entertain more as compared to the old people. I feel this...
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Line 2, column 375, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'like'
Suggestion: like
...and mother were weak than me. They also likes to celebrate and enjoy. Due to their h...
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Line 2, column 475, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
... different psychological problems, they does not go with me pub in Friday evening. H...
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Line 3, column 593, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hich we should have to left one day. And , majority of the family can be seen the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, however, if, moreover, so, while, after all, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53015075377 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33623755578 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489949748744 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1667058528 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.7777777778 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7407407407 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07407407407 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31606520927 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838672988078 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112300402756 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246371474385 0.150856017488 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121005357528 0.0645574589148 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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