Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Enjoyment in life is vital aspect, everyone need enjoyment in life. Without enjoyment, our life becomes unexciting, insipid and boring. There are different ways of enjoying life and different age group opt different ways of enjoyment. The way of enjoying life differences as difference in age; young enjoy differently than older people. I agree to the statement above that young enjoy life more than the older people.
Firstly, the older people, because of their age less active than the young ones, they mostly prefer to be sitting at a place. However, young people are mostly active and would love to peregrinate. For example, we can see many young people go from one place to another, visiting different places, but for old people it would be an arduous task.
Young people has high enthusiasm, energy, excitement compared to old people, so they want to enjoy much. In contrast, old people are less active, excited, less energized so they would enjoy less than young people. We can see that young people are risk takers, adventurous. They prefer to task risk and can enjoy the adventurous journey, but such type of enjoyment is hard for the older people. Older people are more entangled to business, family problems, and economical hardship, so to get time out of this is challenging. However, young people are less involved in such kind of difficulties.
Moreover, availability of various scientific development has made younger to enjoy different kinds of enjoyment, which older people don't get it. For example, various kinds of car racing, bike racking, online games, etc. Such kinds of games are mostly loved by younger people rather than older people. Additionally, various kinds of physical games such as football, cricket, basketball, etc are played enthusiastically by younger people, but in case of older people it would be nearly impossible to older one.
In sum, we can conclude that, younger people enjoy life more than older people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, in contrast, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.178125 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63690566467 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49375 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3250941551 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2105263158 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.517408755347 0.236089414692 219% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190884451795 0.076458572812 250% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10082315056 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322431393123 0.150856017488 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794439065599 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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